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September 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This chapter, for some reason, made me feel completely diffrent about Sidja again. I like her... I love her! This chapter erases all of the evil that she seemed to have around her. It's amazing how well you have done her in this chapter, truly. Phi seemed to become an ungrateful brat, shrinking back into her sad little "I don't deserve to be here" blah blah bullshit. I'm glad Sidja got her in line and got a bit of kinkiness in there. But that's about all I can say, sadly... sorry for such a short review.
Also, I would buy the ebook. It would be such a good read and enough kink to keep me entertained and wanting more and more. But since I can get it free here, no need to buy anything. Cheers.
Also, I would buy the ebook. It would be such a good read and enough kink to keep me entertained and wanting more and more. But since I can get it free here, no need to buy anything. Cheers.
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September 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
the kiss was just a lovely touch, and I'm excited to read when they meet the Baron. ^_~. Good job.
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September 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
"He’s sort of a connoisseur of this sort of thing.”
“Of what sort of thing?”
“Sweet, pretty little girls.”
That sounds so wrong, but it made me laugh so hard. Nice work as usual!
“Of what sort of thing?”
“Sweet, pretty little girls.”
That sounds so wrong, but it made me laugh so hard. Nice work as usual!
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September 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ok first off my apologies for not reviewing sooner, school has started again and woro has gotten more intense. Now to answer your question i would totally buy this if you published it. Secondly i love how the story is progressing, the relationship between the queen and phi is just well done. Phi is one admiral cookie. Keep up the excellent work.
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September 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Royally Fucked? Quite serious, isn't She? But so lacking in imagination. I confess myself a bit saddened by that. I'm also rather glad She laughed. Perhaps it was just so silly that She didn't take me seriously though...
Onto the review. Yes. The Queen does NOT understand Phi's feelings at all about the collar. But I'll address that in a moment. Phi's doll really honestly took the spotlight for me, as it hopefully did for Sidja. It was just a token of affection, something made out of the pure desire of Phi's heart, even more for herself than for Sidja. Just to be that much closer to her Queen. It is all so true what Phi said, that a collar is the mark of ownership, the mark of an animal or a lesser being. So I say give Phi a pin and some small bit of clothing to wear it on. Perhaps a little ribbon with rather thick material, so the pin wouldn't pull right through it.
The end of the chapter redeemd Sidja ever so slightly, talking about my favorite person to hate in this story. Hopefully they can get rid of Averring and be at peace when they return to the castle. Would almost be nice if news came along that Averring was returning home and was killed by bandits along the roadside.
Bravo on another chapter and honestly, those dolls are cute. Wondeful work on them. As always, looking forward to the next chapter.
Onto the review. Yes. The Queen does NOT understand Phi's feelings at all about the collar. But I'll address that in a moment. Phi's doll really honestly took the spotlight for me, as it hopefully did for Sidja. It was just a token of affection, something made out of the pure desire of Phi's heart, even more for herself than for Sidja. Just to be that much closer to her Queen. It is all so true what Phi said, that a collar is the mark of ownership, the mark of an animal or a lesser being. So I say give Phi a pin and some small bit of clothing to wear it on. Perhaps a little ribbon with rather thick material, so the pin wouldn't pull right through it.
The end of the chapter redeemd Sidja ever so slightly, talking about my favorite person to hate in this story. Hopefully they can get rid of Averring and be at peace when they return to the castle. Would almost be nice if news came along that Averring was returning home and was killed by bandits along the roadside.
Bravo on another chapter and honestly, those dolls are cute. Wondeful work on them. As always, looking forward to the next chapter.
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September 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, exciting! A gathering of, of, whatever they call themselves!
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September 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What a fun and playful chapter. As well as ever so slightly strange. Phi becomes so childish and innocent at the start, bubbling about in excitement. Sidja's comparsion of Phi being much like a hunting dog in the manner she was acting. It's pretty cute, and reminded me of that one picture you shared on the art forums, of Phi attacking the lion, whatever his name is, to keep it from harming Sidja. The middle of the chapter, completely dodging the lord and his usual way of trying to poke his nose into fucking everything, was cute. But it's also where it got strange, with the trees and Sidja's story about them. Though I do agree that some trees might have spirits in them, espcially when they survive in harsh environments.
Moments after, the jokes she made at Phi's expense. I am once again gifted to the sight of Sidja's sense of humor, something I had again thought had died long ago with her last servant, Celia. But onto more serious business, with the return of and more information provided about the Circle. The Circle of Roses... certainly a beautiful name, but just as scary and dangerous as a rose can be. There is a slight worry that I feel at this point, a slight concern that the Circle of Roses does more than just bring their servants and talk and have a little fun. I can only hope the experience isn't too dramatic or unhealthy in Phi's case.
Sidja is as clever as a wolf in sheeps clothing, using Her words to bait Phi so quickly. If only Phi weren't so loyal then she could avoid going to the party and avoid any major drama or harm that would befall her there. But alas, she will likely be ever loyal to her Sidja. I personally would be very distrustful of Sidja at that point and balk at Her talk about the Circle of Roses. There are also two things that make me very aware that something might happen at the party, both said by Sidja in some form. "I have happened upon a little rose hiding in the corner of My garden, a pale specimen with a hint of blush at the centre. I know you’ll love her." The last part of that sentence, and then this short sentence "Let the dance begin.”. It is as if Phi will be thrust into a very disgusting scene and be incredibly unwilling to do anything but cling to her Sidja and wait for the party to end. I'm keeping an eye on you Sidja... don't harm Phi any more than you already do.
Moments after, the jokes she made at Phi's expense. I am once again gifted to the sight of Sidja's sense of humor, something I had again thought had died long ago with her last servant, Celia. But onto more serious business, with the return of and more information provided about the Circle. The Circle of Roses... certainly a beautiful name, but just as scary and dangerous as a rose can be. There is a slight worry that I feel at this point, a slight concern that the Circle of Roses does more than just bring their servants and talk and have a little fun. I can only hope the experience isn't too dramatic or unhealthy in Phi's case.
Sidja is as clever as a wolf in sheeps clothing, using Her words to bait Phi so quickly. If only Phi weren't so loyal then she could avoid going to the party and avoid any major drama or harm that would befall her there. But alas, she will likely be ever loyal to her Sidja. I personally would be very distrustful of Sidja at that point and balk at Her talk about the Circle of Roses. There are also two things that make me very aware that something might happen at the party, both said by Sidja in some form. "I have happened upon a little rose hiding in the corner of My garden, a pale specimen with a hint of blush at the centre. I know you’ll love her." The last part of that sentence, and then this short sentence "Let the dance begin.”. It is as if Phi will be thrust into a very disgusting scene and be incredibly unwilling to do anything but cling to her Sidja and wait for the party to end. I'm keeping an eye on you Sidja... don't harm Phi any more than you already do.
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September 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
My deepest sentiments of awe are given to you. I had an idea that the circle of roses would be something along those lines, and I would have loved to see Phi kick that pompous fool in the face. The fact that he was practically ordering her to 'Sit tight' was it? I truly think that he has a death wish. (If he wishes to die as much as all that, I would be more than happy to oblige him with my fiery temperament and dark nature)
And the fact that Phi let her guard down made me smile (laugh really). Tis the most pleasurable thing to read on the dawn of a new day. Thanking you plenty.
I will read again when next you decide to grace me with your presence (I was nearly going into withdrawal there for a moment, kept checking and not seeing anything new from you... -.-')
Ever your faithful servant
Saige
And the fact that Phi let her guard down made me smile (laugh really). Tis the most pleasurable thing to read on the dawn of a new day. Thanking you plenty.
I will read again when next you decide to grace me with your presence (I was nearly going into withdrawal there for a moment, kept checking and not seeing anything new from you... -.-')
Ever your faithful servant
Saige
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September 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well well, it seems Her Majesty is human, after all. All this time She's come across... super-human. Good to see She isn't.
Phi is still an adorable little thing. How old is she, really?
Phi is still an adorable little thing. How old is she, really?
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September 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I'm dying to know more! Will Phi be shared? Will that feckless pig Averring be part of the circle? Her Majesty did say it'd been many years since she last went. Please, please hurry with the next fabulous chapter!