rate_review Reviews

Yay! You took both of my suggestions... or already had them planned and I just happened to have mentioned them. This chapter was beyond nice. Very good length, good content. Phi seems to be really wising up to her Queen and how awful it would be to stay with her. But still Phi for now is bound to Sidja. Phi's hangover was funny, but I am sympathetic to her pains and waking up after such a dead sleep. Sidja is honestly too mean, under a normal light. Under the light of this story, she is quite justified in being mean to the hungover Phi. This was such a good chapter, but the next sounds like it is going to be INCREDIBLE. So I'm really looking forward to it.

By the way. You asked why we reviewers can't believe that Sidja might just be truly evil and had done all those things that the girls said. I can only speak for myself. I love Sidja. I want to give my belief that she hasn't done any evil acts without being justified for doing them. But... I still have my suspicions. Sidja is such an unknown. If only I could get her all locked up in that little torture room and try to get information from her. Might work.

Holy Crap!! I hope those eight bitches get thrown into a meat grinder! How infuriating. Nice to see some courage on Phi's part though, even if it was alcohol induced. Oooohh!! Here's an idea, Sidja should get Phi drunk, put a knife in her hand and leave her alone with Averring. Hehe, diced pain-in-the-ass. Keep up the good work, please.

I like this chapter but what I felt that i could still be elaborated some more, like Phi's emotions could be explored a bit more, at her reaction to not being like them, how they spoke of the queen. Just what I felt please take no offense, and I love chapter don't get me wrong. Just constructive criticism and my opinion. Take care ^_^

Lady Phi has much more of a backbone than any of them ever anticipated. I can't believe it, but I was getting pissed at all of them for talking like that about Sidja. Personally, I kind of hoped that Sidja could hear what her little dearheart said to defend her. I can see why it's your favorite chapter (it's mine too).

I think Constantine should not be near liquor... ever... I'm going to wait most impatiently for the continuation as the only thing I didn't like was the immense shortness you gave us in this chapter. -goes on knees and begs- 'May I please be granted with more of your works?'

On another note, I would like to purchase this book if you have it published (The name 'Royally Fucked' does seem adequate) if only to have the pages to turn in my hand (I have a thing about the retro effect of reading) I am looking forward to your next installment.

Ever an avid reader
Saige

I saw the title of this chapter and just groaned. Phi getting drunk is trouble enough, but getting angry is like pouring rocket fuel onto a fire. This chapter indeed did melt down that way, but that is what made it so good. I find it curious to think that Sidja is evil in such a way, and believe that the girls are lying. Maybe I'm just naive, but whatever. Phi is such a cutie, being so loyal to her Sidja.

Good chapter, looking forward to the next. Thankfully Sidja has no reason to attack me yet and Phi's sassing doesn't work when she's drunk.

Please don't merge the chapters!! Chapter 28 was sweet and gentle and beautiful, those evil trolls in chapter 27 would ruin it. I noticed a couple of times this chapter Sidja used a capital letter when referring to Phi as 'You'. A sign of the true depth of her affection perhaps?

I'll admit, when I saw that you updated again, I basically told who I was on the phone with to buzz off so I could read and squeal to my hearts content. :D you made me so happy!!! They should find a way to harness happiness and lust, and use it to power cities, it'll be so much better for the environment.

To have had both chapters merged into one would have seemed a bit more logical, but at the same time, the two chapters bring a slightly different perspective read separately. so both ways are good for me (besides, it allowed me to be pleasurably surprised.)

On another, more dangerous, note I must add that it is sweet that the White Queen herself has taken such a care for the girl that she'd like to crush sometimes. I'll admit to wanting to stick my claws into some types of people on occasion, but for reasons I keep that under check. (She will be forced to realize exactly what that level or care is going to lead to soon I hope... ;)

Avid fan
Saige

It's always a pleasurable surprise to read a chapter, refresh a few hours later and find another one. I like it better as 2 chapters. I love a good cliff-hanger, keeps the reader reading.

Yay! We finally meet the Baron. I like him too. Specially his name. But the girls are interesting as well. They all sound cute, but just seem to be little side shows. The conversation between Sidja and the Baron was unique and I do believe the Baron hit the nail on the head. So bravo to you sir. But more now onto the inventions that the Baron has created. He has a slight old fat kind man look to him, but the invention he created leads to me believing that under the fat and jolly attitude, the man is actually brillant. Perhaps dangerous brillant.

The rest of the chapter was simple, cute and fun. Phi though, still. She's being so silly. Phi, I have suffered a rather rotten life. I am a bit luckier than you, but not by much. So don't go sassing me little girl.

The appearance of this chapter surprised me, as I didn't expect another one so soon. Bravo on your swift speed, and double bravo to Sidja... though I might just be afraid of her cattle prod. Don't use it on me, Sidja! *points at Adelphus*

When I first started reading I thought the Queen is much too hard on Phi but after I read it I find myself thinking I wouldn't like the queen any other way. She's softening up but the change is gradual. If she suddenly did a 180 and was all in love with Phi I really wouldn't like her then. Great job finding the pefect balance between Ice Queen we all want to hate and still a human that you love. I can't wait to see how they characters further develop.