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It's been a while since I reviewed, but I lost track of this story for a while. I still find I sympathise very strongly with both the Queen and little Phi, even if I'm closer to the Queen's type, myself. I wanted to let you know that I absolutely adore this story. It's an interesting diversion for me, as I have been without for a while.

Keep up the wonderful work!

I actually gasped out loud at the end of this part of the chapter. What a cliffhanger...

The chapter as a whole had me entranced. I felt like I was actually there... and I was right about the altar. I just felt this sense of foreboding build throughout the whole chapter, especially near to the end. I'm practically quivering with anticipation for what's to come next.

Hello, just wanted to say that your writing is amazing. Not only does it flow beautifully, but the plotline you've created, as well as your characters and minimal but thorough descriptions keep me hooked and wanting more with every chapter. If I could draw, id do fanart. I can write, but im afraid that whatever I could come up with simply would not be able to match the original by even a tenth.

When you first mentioned the Circle of the Roses I thought of people standing around an alter, offering Phi up to some sort of god... Of course now I see how wrong I was, but something tells me not to put it past them...

Speaking of Phi, it always amuses me to see glimpses of her innocence- seeing a naked man and crossdressers, constantly being mistaken for jailbait... I dont know, theres something about it all that makes me laugh.

And speaking of Phi's innocence, considering how Sidja has been seen to treat Phi, both behind the scenes and in 'public' , Id say that she has it at least a little easier than some of these other roses. I think that the rape occurring is not for the best (despite the copious amount of sexytimes it provides) but at least Phi is treated with an air of respect- although she submits, she submits mostly willingly, and isn't degraded into being a footstool (though she could be used as an armrest by the Queen- as a smaller woman myself, this often happens to me). But... Only time will tell.

Anyways, I eagerly look forward to the next chapter. You've made a Queensbride addict out of me, and I am already going through withdrawal.

What? What? What? No! What?..... GAH!!!! what the hell?! how could you leave it like that?! Are you INSANE?!!! i hope you're updating tonight!! Like, now... soon... don't make me wait a whole day for this Adelphus. You will regret it. If you think Sidja is bad you really don't want to play with me like that!

(Take this as a complement... But seriously. don't make me wait a whole day)

.... THE FUCK?!?!? Okay... before addressing the chapters end, the chapter itself was rather delicious and sweet. The dancers were incredible and all in all it was a sight to remember. Then the altar made sense for such a place, showing off the "rose" to all the guests. But Sidja's reaction should have been more extreme... the jackass should have gotten his arm broken.

Now, the ending.... well, I'm hoping. Sidja just pluged it Down. Not into anything. I hope she stops just inches before maring the flesh. If she doesn't, then I swear, I am going to find her and drive an arrow RIGHT THROUGH HER HEART! If she even has one...

This was an awful but brillant cliffhanger. I really want the third chapter now. Please! Don't leave us hanging!!!

How awful... the Circle of Roses is truly a sickening group. Now yes, granted, they are all into slavery and lots of sexual shit, plus a fair bit of BDSM as obviously set under the lines of slavery... anyways the chapter itself was good, but sadly very short. It is a bummer that you have to post this whole chapter of the Circle of Roses into parts, but at least you left it off at a very good point. I look forward to the next chapter and hope to see more.

My heart stopped. Just thinking of anyone other than Sidja giving Phi even one lash (accidental or not) made me infuriated. I really really really want to read the rest of this my dear. Soon, very soon... -leaves off in an ominous tone-

I've not long joined this site but this is one of the best stories I've read so far. I read it all in a matter of hours (while at work, which must say something about how much I like it)
I love the fragile little maid/powerful and dominant queen dynamic you've created. It feeds my love for hurt-comfort stories, everything really well balanced to make a believable work of fiction.
I can't wait for the next chapter, and every chapter after that.

Certainly keep it two seperate chapters. This one was good, fun to read, really sweet. That's about all I can really say though. Phi needs to lay off the bottle, for the rest of her life. While I admire the fact that she turns into an honest drunk, she's going to get herself in serious, possibly life ending trouble if she keeps on hitting the bottle. Though I'm probably wasting keystrokes saying that, as Phi will know when she wakes with hangover. I hope you do that, as it would be kinda funny and worth it and also teach Phi a very swift lesson.

Nice job on the quick update. Looking forward to the next chapter!

I personally think its fine these chapters being separated. I could vividly see a drunk Phi and her antics and not falling asleep. It was cute an adorable and I wanna see what happens the next time she offers herself and what the queen will do. By the way glad to see the accuracy in describing how drunk she was. Sound very similar when I'm drunk, I can't sleep and keep waking the other individuals.