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HELL YES!!! GO PHI!!! Oh man alive what a chapter. I was scared at first that Averring was really going to kill her, but Phi is still as cunning as she has always been, still powerful enough to do a fair amount of damage. Though with Averring out of the way, where will the story go, I wonder... in any case, I have to ask that Sidja not get rid of Phi, though I doubt that she would. Even though Phi has been defiled by a man, I think Sidja might be forgiving in this case, since it was never Phi's desire to be so much as touched by that man, let alone defiled by him. She is also a very smart little gal, giving her Queen the chance to kill Averring in whatever method She desire.

Also, thank you for responding to the reviews once again. They were fun to read and the videos you provided were stunning, specially the fire fingers one. Also, sorry to hear that bad news about your domme. Seems like you're recovering well though, so good job on that. Brillant work on this chapter, and looking forward to more delights in future chapters. Bravo

Jesus Holy Christ.

When I saw there was a new chapter I got so excited- but now I can say I honestly feel terrified. Good job, a great writer can always make their readers feel.

Nothing good can last forever. I thought Averring would out the Queen's sexual habits somehow, but hes so much more of a threat than he seemed to be. Arrogance, rape, intended murder... Phi should've bit his bits off.

But Phi. My God, Phi. I'm scared of what will happen to her- emotionally, she's been wrecked. Physically, partially destroyed. But she intends to kill herself... I can only hope that the Queen or someone will find her and stop her. I'm glad she's telling Sidja she loves her, but I thought it would come differently.

Amazing, terrifying, heartbreaking job. If you keep us hanging, I will die.

One: I am going to kill Reginald. But I am not just going to kill him. I'm going to make him suffer. I will be the fear that keeps him awake, the shadows on the wall, the monsters they become and the nightmare in his skull. Every thing that I am, dark and evil as I am, will be the embodiment of his torture. Reginald will pay, not only for defiling that which he is not allowed to touch, but for daring to even think those things about Her Majesty. His death will not be quick, his pain more monumental than the most indiscriminate torture that one can think of. His lands, his people, his own foolish pride shall crumble beneath the terror and destruction of the 'Hand of Death' herself.

Two: Phi is not going to die. I forbid it. I hold her as dear to me a my own flesh and blood. I will not allow her death and as I control death, that's saying something.

Three: REGINALD WILL DIE! Slowly and painfully (I don't know how much more I can stress that point)

I really need to get another chapter soon though. I've missed seeing you up there.

Quite a chapter... ugly, sickening and horrible chapter that is. Reggie is pushing things too far and being well... very spoiled brat like, as I would expect from him. I hope this is not a sign of bad things to come. I hope Sidja kicks Averring out of the castle if he hasn't left already. He just has no business whatsoever trying to screw around with Sidja and Phi. Royality or not.

That's about all I can say for this chapter. I know you'll get to responding to the reviews when you're able, though I hope it to be soon, cause I like hearing the slight feedback from the author. So good luck, and looking forward to something less awful than this chapter. *wasn't done bad, just contained a huge blemish, named Reggie Averring.*

I swear to god let me at Averring. The arrogance! Phi and the Queen don't have to lifts finger, I'll go after that smug jerk for them.

and even worse now we know he's planning something. grah.

Excellent story, I felt compelled to read all the chapters in one sitting.

The queen is definitely a sadist, but you have managed to make her somewhat sympathetic too.
Of course in real life, someone like the queen would probably kill their playmate in a fit of rage or simply by accident.

I also find myself wishing sometimes that Phi would stand up for herself.

It's been so long since I've been this addicted to a story.
Can't wait to have moar.

The latest chapter has definitely become my favourite one so far. The eloquence and passion of Phi's speech reallu did show another side of her, one that, until recently, we have seen only glimpses of. I've gained more respect for Phi, and feel more for the Queen.

Speaking of feeling, now that She has admitted to herself that She has feelings for Phi, I wonder if anything will change? I can only wait patiently for the next chapter to find out...

And as for you, I hope that you'll feel better soon. Whoever or whatever broke your heart should be ashamed.

Waiting eagerly for more!

WOW!!!! Phi is incredible. I never thought she could give such a speech and be capable of saying such powerful things. Now I respect her a lot more and I applaude Sidja on finding her. Phi was so brave and continues to be so brave for her Sidja. Now if only the Queen would completely accept that. Though I have this gut feeling that as much as she wants to, she really can't. She would love to, but She just can't, possibly not yet or not at all.

A huge applaudes to both Phi, once again, and to you Adelphus for cranking out another chapter so quickly. Looking for to the rest of this story, as it seems to be coming along epicly.

It was as I thought. *lowers the crossbow* Sidja is still awful mean though. Yes, Phi is her property. But that doesn't excuse the undue stress that Phi suffered from. Like us, she thought she was going to be killed. Now while she wasn't, being turned into a piece of art with a knife wasn't all that pleasant either. Plus the dull knife being inserted into her most private and special of places. Yes, Sidja wanted that reaction like she was being stabbed with a real knife, but a tiny bit of a warning would have been nice. The only act of kindness that Isadj did here was finally letting Phi rest and keeping watch over here.

Now I know that I'm trying to balance two sides. All in all, everything Sidja did was quite alright given the situation. I just have choice words about the situation. lol. I'm glad you finally got this chapter up and I read the review forum that you have up. I'm sad to hear you had to suffer like that and am very glad to hear that you are supported by the reviewers waiting for you. It's quite alright to take a rest though, relax your brain and such. Just promise you'll be back, okay? Ha. Good luck Adelphus.