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August 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am indeed thrilled and somewhat curious into knowing what happens next. Also, may I ask if, by consideration of the last chapter, this smirks a hint of "Bathory" in it? It does have it`s allure, don`t you think ? But again, this is the tale of Phi and she does need to "grow up" when dealing with life.
Not all beauties are kind or beasts alike.
Not all beauties are kind or beasts alike.
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August 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow...wasn't expecting that at the end. Been readin' this for a while now and I've gotta say it's interesting. I do hope Phi won't end up like all the others before her.
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August 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Gah I devour each chapter so fast I want MOAR! It's been a while since a story has captivated me so much, that I check daily to see if there is an update. This was a cute chapter. I love Phi's roller coaster of emotion. If a crazy roller coaster like that existed I would ride that shit over and over. I love how detail orientated you are, I can vividly see this and all the other scenes in my head. *thumbs up* Hell of a job your doing. ^_^
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August 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Woot!! This was such a good chapter and it makes me feel like I'm back in those hard times when Queens and Kings ruled and there would always need to be someone to make sure the royality wouldn't be poisoned. That aside, Phi is really starting to come across as quite dumb, or simply lacking knowledge. It scares me a little, but alas. I would actually love to serve this woman, Sidja. She is, in a few words, dangerously beautiful.
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August 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Been a while since I reviewed, and I must say that you're doing quite well. I can only hope that poor Phi doesn't trip all over herself on her first day as Her Majesty's personal servant.
Keep up the good work, mate!
Keep up the good work, mate!
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August 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesome i come home from a hard day at work and look what I find, an update. Freaking sweet. You know what I forgot to mention about the last chapter, when you describe how Phi lost her hard earned apples. I swear I was like 'awww the apples.' Just mentioning that since I re-read it before reading the new chapter. Any who awesome job. I hope I don't wait too long for another update.
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August 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ooo... this chapter was short but sweet. Phi suddenly submitting worries me though. It's sort of a spur of the moment decision, one that might come back to bite her later in the day. That aside, it was sweet and hot and a good sort of filler chapter to get something over with fast. Good chap, looking forward to the next.
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August 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
D'awwww. That was sweet.
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August 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hm, the Queen is learning. Very cool, very interesting, but how will She function in the world with these sort of lessons going on?
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August 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The title of the latest chapter is quite right. I'm glad to see the Queen is having some more thoughts for Phi and not just selfish thoughts for Herself. It seems like there will still be some "road blocks" along the way. Good chapter and looking forward to more. :D