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Hey, will this story be updated in the future? I'd love to see more.

Great! I find the pain Phi endures are so hard to reason... I really hated Phi getting raped. It was horrible. Ugh. I love the progress of the White Queen. Your writing is grand and wonderful. :)

Soooooo Good!! fell in love with your story from the first chapter and could not stop until i read it the whole way through! Its a breath of fresh air - excuse the expression - to read something that has not only direction with their story but takes the reader along the journey in a way that it captivates! very nice! i look foward to reading more of your work :)

So, since i've started reading this story, i'd definitely have to say i've become absolutely obsessed. Everything about it is fantastic, and i'd definitely have to say i find it rare to read a story that i cant stop reading no matter how many times i've already done so beforehand and hoping every time i get on here that there will be another chapter, if this was a book, id make sure that i had it no matter what, and honestly i'd love to see something this in depth on film, i love this story and the characters, other then Avering, Gah i hate that ass hole, but thankfully he's finally getting what he deserves. I cant wait till the next chapter.

-sincerly
An Uber Obsessed Fan

Apparently the Queen does have a heart after all.

Such a sweet chapter. It doesn't surprise me that the guards would love Phi, that much has been hinted at and seen in previous chapters with how they ask and dote on her. And it also figures that someone else from the Southern Lands would be rather rude about The attack on Phi.

I do hope that Phi is just exhausted and not too injured. Its sweet that she still wants to serve tea to the amabassadors, despite her current condition.

And to the Queen... Your little flashes of jealousy really do amuse me. And Your usage of Phibbity Phi. Its downright adorable actually. If it wasn't for my sudden recollection of Your collection of floggers, Id say that You're a big softie at heart.

Anyways, lovely chapter. Your story is always a pick me up to me.

This came as a surprise. It was a good surprise though. I'm glad to see that you are alive and well and still producing decent if not awesome work. But I sadly don't have a lot to say. It was interesting to see that someone other than Phi or Sidja had sided with the actions taken against Averring. Very nice touch. The thing that stuck out was near the beginning of the chapter, when Sidja was having a strange mental arguement with herself. It is yet to be seen that she may undo all she has sought to protect. It is not something I wish to see, but I would understand if the story went that way. This also brings to light an element I love, that a person is rarely going to be completely content, especially someone like Sidja who has known nothing but dissapointment, betrayal and frustration. Plus she has given chances to so many people, that even if Phi remains totally loyal and in love with Her, Sidja could still end up screwing it up.

*chuckles* So human... I love it.

YAY it continues i was hoping this would not end so soon umm for me you've probably been working on it forever. I wonder will this female guard become a reoccurring character and be somehow important i think it would be interesting. Also i am glad to see Averring will get everything he deserves once you decided what that should be.

I rarely save something and reread it but this one i am going to have to save somewhere so i can read it time and time again. Your writing is exceptional and i know i will want to revisit it and i am excited to see your still writing.

keep going.

I should make a real account. There was never any need to, (nor any need to review) before this story came along.

anyways, I've spent so much time both offline and rereading earlier chapters that I completely missed the fact that a new chapter was added.

Oh Sidja. Your jealousy is, dare I say it, quite amusing and cute. And very irrational, but that kind of talking can get me maimed.

I can't wait for when Phi wakes up. And I also can't wait to see exactly what happens to Averring. Methinks that the guards are going to have to teach him a well-deserved lesson...

someone should tell Averring not to drop the soap. Actually, no... leave him in the dark.(/end obligation to make bad prison joke)


Eagerly looking forward to the next chapter! Take as long as you need, one cannot rush art.

and, on a parting note, congratulations.

Queensbride is OVER 9000!!!!!!