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by Noxtroious

person Melsa
schedule July 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I was hoping he would break free from them on the way to the limo...what a bad friend Jascha is.
person Melsa
schedule July 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am pretty pissed off right now, he lost the bidding. I want to know why he didn't just speak up and say why he wanted them. If it was such an important person to him wouldn't you risk everything to get them back? Also just because it's hard to picture I could use better descriptions of the characters, you made up names for these species but no descriptions of what they are which makes it really hard to imagine. And I want to see him get Nikolai before that other guy takes him home and rapes him. If he doesn't I don't want to keep reading ;_;