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by Lilysoos

schedule August 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh shit Lily, you are cruel! lol Leaving it like that!!! You better update quick now, you hear? hahha

Omg, I can't believe Jess kissed Sam! Poor Sam; I really think he needed that kiss too.....

Oh, I noticed a typo: when Sam asked Jess if he wanted to go outside on the balcony b/c the whether was nice; that weather is spelled weather, not whether. :)

Anyway, I can't wait to read about Sam's reaction, and Jess's as well, lol!
person Cas
schedule August 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love this fiction so much! Jess is adorable, please update with chapter 11 soon :)
person Aveleene
schedule August 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*scrams*
YES YES YES >.<
Finally, took you long enough Jess!
Gosh!

Btw I must say that I love the way you write I can totaly imagine Jess Character this far, and I love it. x3
person Sarkukka
schedule August 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So nice! =)) Poor Jess he must have the mother of all hangovers. And the drinking like donkey isn't ever worth it. Been there, done that. But Sam came like knight in shining armor to get him. That's so sweet!
Thank you for the update! This's really great fic.
person Talltree-san
schedule August 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG, what happen! You need to do a play back on what happened between Sam and Jess! Though I could take a wild guess on what happened between them though (wink,wink) ;)!
person Roberta
schedule August 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thanks! Fantastic chapter.
I love Jess when he's drunk, he's really funny, I couldn't stop grinning for the whole chapter. I had to check nobody was watching me or they would have thought I was crazy. =)
schedule August 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Evil! to leave it at such a point. >:]
schedule August 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG! NOOOOOOOO! LOL! I can't believe you left the story there! You are so evil :) I've been wasted that bad before. OMG, poor Sam.
person js
schedule August 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I'm glad that he called Sam.
person jaskolka
schedule August 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The drunk Jess is such a sweet, cutie pie-ish heap of adorableness that can be only compared to the cutest kittens and puppies at their best moments. You just want to squeeze and cuddle them all the freaking time.
I am so very happy that our two hotties are already back together... and even more so since they are in the same bed, haha.
BTW, I would so love to know what Sam was thinking when he got the surprise call from the happy mess that Jess was in the bar...
Great job.