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by Lilysoos

person Saminada
schedule September 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG! He kissed him!!!! WOOTTT!!!

I'm so freaking happyyyyyyyy! ^^ I just hope that he wont regret it now! >_<

And I'm so darn in love with this story! I check everyday for an update and I'm freaking happy when there's one LOL!

Keep up the good work and I can't wait for more!
person Avon
schedule September 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
First off, let me say i love how you wrote this. Jess' inner monologues are extremely amusing and very believable. I thought the first couple chapters felt a bit hectic, but hearing the mental train wreck he's going through is a good thing. I bow to your ability to make that sound like a real guy.

Can't wait to see more!
schedule September 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
XDXDXDXD
I LOVE Jess.. he´s too cute for his own good! Sam is rights he´s like a little kitten^^
And he did it he did it... Wah, I can´t wait for the next chappy!!
What will happen now? After all... getting back into denial will become hard after a kiss indicated by Jess himself XDDDD
Please update soon, I´m anxiously waiting here and surely I won´t be the only one^^
Best wishes & thanks for another beautiful written chapter
Chikage
person Roberta
schedule September 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Finally Jess kissed Sam!
I need to know what is going to happen next, I can't wait.
person addiena saffir
schedule September 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thank you God another kiss finally! Come on Sammy boy sweep that angsty emo man off his feet.
person rasf
schedule September 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So glad I started reading this! Quickly become a new fav of mine!

I can't WAIT for the next chapter!
person Thuly
schedule August 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yesh!!!!!!!! He kissed Sam on his own... O_O; I'm rooting for him and Sam to be together but I kinda feel bad for the girlfriend. I mean, Sam is his girlfriend's friend? The situation is a bit f-up but all is fair is love and war.
person Talltree-san
schedule August 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You had to end it there didn't you?! It was getting so good too XD!!
schedule August 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yes!!! I've been checking this story everyday praying for an update!!! OMG, Jess is so adorable when he's hungover! A bit of a spaz, but adorable! I knew Sam wouldn't take advantage of him. He's a stand up guy! And I feel so bad for him for losing his mom :( Jamie, that little bitch, better watch out! I feel a big showdown coming on between him and Jess after he said "That bastard! HE'S SO VERY DEAD!" I can't wait!! I just can't see this story ending good at all. Unless Anna does something bad in Las Vegas and gives Jess a reason to end their relationship. (keeping fingers crossed!) lol.
person Sym
schedule August 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'd like to thank you for writing this.
For lots of reasons, but mostly because I really look forward to new chapters because they're just fun to read.
That, and 'Sam-fucking-Grey' really makes me want to draw him all possessive of Jess.
But that can wait until I've had a couple more art classes. >>

So thank you, and I can't wait to watch Jess spaz out again. ^ u ^