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by Lilysoos

person Anon
schedule April 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yay I'm so glad this story is up and running again :) it was one of my favorites before the break and it's quickly drawn me back in. I can't wait 4 more so please update and finish this story :)
person Moose
schedule April 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
your doing a great job with this story! keep at it we loyal fans will wait for your next updated! hope it comes soon!!!
person Lisa
schedule April 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ah Lily! Thank God you're back!!!!! :)

I love this story so much! Jess is so funny; his inner thoughts are just hysterical! Haha, he even put Sam's number in his phone as Sam-fucking-Grey, omg, that was funny! :)

I'm so glad he finally admitted to Sam that he wanted him and he's scared. Which is normal of course. After all, he went thru his whole life straight and now he meets someone who is questioning that and making him feel all these emotions he's never felt before.

Awesome two chaptes Lily! Looking forward to more! :)
schedule April 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh HELL yes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This was AWESOME!!!! The sex was hot, Lily!! Very well done. I totally melted in my chair!!! SQUEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!
schedule April 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I must say it was a good scene so no worries! :) hehehe. Jess confessed...sorta and Sam was coming back all along. What a wonderful way to speed things up. great job.
schedule April 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
smoke'n hot! They're adorable!
person blueskies
schedule April 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, you don't need to be afraid - that scene was freaking hot!
I love how Sam calls Jess Kitten. It somehow suits him perfectly - he is just adorable...
person nea
schedule April 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You did a great job for your first time writing a blowjob scene. I totally enjoyed it. Wonder how Jess is gonna feel about it later though...
person Talltree-san
schedule April 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Nope, the "scene" seemed fine to me *winks* <3!!!
schedule April 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This was just amazingly awesome >_< I mean I was reading it before when you used to update and I just happened to come back to the site to see if anything new and interesting was here and, I see this!!! OMG! I can't believe Jess offered to break it off. I hope you really do continue and just wanted to let you know I'm still reading :)