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by Lilysoos

person Faithsins
schedule June 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is good please update soon <3
person Narcoleptic
schedule June 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Am happy their finally working things out ut I'm a little worried about what will happens when the bubblbe bursts i.e the girlfriend...

Please email when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com
person Amaterashu
schedule May 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Aww, that was so sweet it gave me cavities but also so good I can't wait till the next chapter. Keep up the good work. ^_^
schedule May 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ahh i love this more every chapter
person Talltree-san
schedule May 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
"No, wait! You can't see my tomato face yet!" freakin loved that XD! But I can't help but feel sorry for the girlfriend getting her man stolen from right under her nose. Even though I prefer Sam for Jess than her any day...sorry girlfriend (can't remember her name now!) LOL!
schedule May 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yay Lily, you're back! :)

Jess is just too cute in this chapter! Tomato face! lol

And Sam should cut him some slack; Jess is just discovering he may not be as straight as he thought, and he's worrying about obsessing over Sam Fucking Grey and the whole dilemma with Anna and what to do about her; Sam's best friend. So yeah, Jess certainly has a lot on his plate at the moment. Sam needs to give him some time to figure things out.

Anyway, awesome chapter as usual. Your story always makes me crack up! lol

Can't wait for more! Have a great Memorial Day Lily! =)
person just me
schedule May 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was really sweet :)
person the runner
schedule April 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
yaaaaaaaaaassss!!! you have no idea how happy this update made me !!! thanks thanks thanks!!
person purgatorium
schedule April 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
L.O.V.E i adore this fic great job on the last chapter!
person Glowbell
schedule April 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow,That was great. You got it so right. I'm glad you are continuing this story. it's one of my favorites on this site, can't wait to read more.