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by Lilysoos

person Samirnie
schedule July 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I loved it! Jess seems like a funny guy. And poor Anna is going to loose her boyfriend. Jee! I liked Sam too - what a stud! And you even through in cute little Tom. Yah, I think you have very good ingredients for a great story. Please, do go on. I'm definitely going to read this hole fic.
schedule July 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit that at first I was afraid that you went with first person, but you won me over after the first sentence. I love Jess! He is very funny and the repetition of "so awkward" was brilliant and i think accurately represented that little fiasco. By the way thank you for not making Sam a twink! I love him as well especially his 'awkward' greetings. Very bold and well um... friendly.

So far I am loving it and it is getting many a good laughs out of me. Please write more especially since you ended it at such an interesting moment. :3
person mw0627
schedule July 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Lmao. How awful would that be? Definatly ackward. But funny as hell for us.

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