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by Lilysoos

person Lisa
schedule August 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh, Jess has it bad! lol Oh man, he was acting just like the jealous b/f with Jamie and with the waitress! And the waitress didn't know wtf was going on! lol

Let's see what happens at the bar! :)
person Melsa
schedule August 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aw, how can he resist that sad face? He should have given in and sat back down or something.
person Talltree-san
schedule August 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG, why was Jamie there! And without his shirt, I really hope Sam and Jamie haven't gotten back together!
schedule August 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Argggh!!!! I hate Jamie! LOVE LOVE LOVE this story!! Can't wait for next chapter.
person blais3rd
schedule August 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
"Ho shit!" was what went thru my mind when Jamie opened the door lol. Please keep this coming!
person Karv
schedule August 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Hurry and write woman! Sam sounds so dreamy! Sexy Time!
person Ataraxia
schedule August 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love Jess' inner narrative. I find him both charming and hilarious. You make excellent characters!
schedule August 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So I had a whole review and AFF ate it!

Ok, Reader's Digest version: WTF is Jamie doing there? And w/o his shirt! Omg, gasp! What were him and Sam doing? lol

Hey, if things don't work out with Sam, maybe Jess could go for Tom!

Ok, I'm on pins and needles here, so please update soon! :)
schedule August 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
DAMIT I LEAVE FOR THIS. seriously its why i log on here every day checkign to see if you have updates. bleh i love ya. UPDATE SOON
schedule August 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just found your story yesterday and I'm so hooked! Poor Jess! And Sam, what a hottie! I'm so looking forward to the next chapter.