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for Unintended

by Lilysoos

person dan
schedule November 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Dont be cruel.Please update soon :(
person Rainwater
schedule April 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Omg nooooooooo you can't leave it there!!!!!!! It's seriously my curse to find fantastic stories that are unfinished!!! Please update soon!
person makosira
schedule June 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Sort of half-marathoned this story through, and I really, really enjoyed it. I would loooove to see what happens next, though I know you haven't updated this in close to a year now. D:

It had to be really hard for Jess to figure anything out at all. And then Sam, having his own feelings, but also being tugged and pushed around by Jess's own as Jess tries to come to terms. And then Anna. I feel sorry for her, buuuut happy that Jess figured stuff out, but hopefully Anna and Jess can still remain good friends, even when she finds out that Jess left her because of his feelings for her best friend, Sam. D;

And I don't even want to get started on Jamie, or people like Jamie...
schedule April 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really miss this story
person Elsa
schedule December 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hi I love this story so much, it's so funny and also I was wondering when are you gonna post new chapters? Please do it soon. =)
schedule August 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
More please, I really love Sam and Jess but I hope Anna finds someone she wasn't a totally Bitch she was pretty cool maybe she can have Jamie lol
schedule August 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit, that Jamie is like one crazy stalker! Poor Sam, he has to put up with all his shit.

On another note, Jess realizes he's attracted to other guys too. lol

I'm so curious to find out why Eric called Jess in there for.

Can't wait for your next update Lily! And also.......I REALLY can't wait for the Austin/Jin update!!! :)

And oh yeah, the Olympics; I'm addicted to them also. :) Go team USA (sorry, had to say that. =) You know, just in case some Olympians are reading this! hahahha yeah, right)
person Talltree-san
schedule August 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That crazy Jamie b**ch is gonna run off and tell Anna about Jess and Sam, and create more heartache all around I just know it DX!!
person alexis
schedule August 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Nice story loved it so far read all 17 chapters in a few hours XD its been a long time since a story made me this anxious to know what happens next so great job with this one and hope you will update soon cant wait to see what happens next i am pretty sure Jamie is up to no good XD anyway thanks for sharring this wonderful story.
person Viky
schedule July 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Poor Anna. But Jess did the right thing for her.

I hope thihg will not go into drama like some tv show :)