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October 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
A lot less shocking and controversial content than most of your stories, but just as well-written. (Yes, you do write well. Regardless of what you say or feel. :P)
Nice detail is that you're not working with one, set, top and one set bottom, but having them switch around. Makes it more realistic, I feel. I would've liked to read more, because it's a bit on the short side, but I suspect that's because it's a challenge fic. If you ever write a second chapter to this one, poke me?
Oh, and sorry for originally posting this from the wrong account. :P
Nice detail is that you're not working with one, set, top and one set bottom, but having them switch around. Makes it more realistic, I feel. I would've liked to read more, because it's a bit on the short side, but I suspect that's because it's a challenge fic. If you ever write a second chapter to this one, poke me?
Oh, and sorry for originally posting this from the wrong account. :P
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July 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm shocked... FANN isn't a public service? Things have certainly changed since I was in college. A great use of the prompt with your trademark humor and delicious characters!