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person Nixed
schedule August 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just caught up from the last two updates and i am loving the plot. There were minor errors but it doesn't bother me. i wonder what will happen next. keep it up!
schedule July 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
the first sequel was good and now there's another oh yeah. good chapter so far i can't wait to see when happened next in this story.
person Nixed
schedule July 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like this new squeal you have going. Honestly, I love how you put a sense of realism into the relationship by infusing the cycle of relationships (the stages of deteriorating/coming apart). Personally, I am rooting for Mel and Ellie to come through with their relationship. But I know you have more in store for them. In the mean time, keep on churning more stories or make some one-shots here and there! Use everything in your spectrum and make the magic happen!

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