rate_review Reviews

A fitting ending for the couple. After everything they've been through, it's great to know they live happily ever after. Thank you.

Stories with as much substance as this (and its prequel) are very hard to find. I greatly enjoy reading the interaction between the characters, most especially Mel and Ellie. Their emotional highs and lows make the story seem very real. I have to say, this is one of the best stories I've read so far. Until the next update!

whoop I love these updates! And I loved how mel acted with the photo, it was super cute :) BTW I'm the anon who was pestering ya on tunblr :P

Had to read from the beginning again to get a refresher.

Man oh man, their relationship is full of secrecy and lies but they love each other so much. I feel sorry for both of them because the way you portray them makes me hate and love them simultaneously. I want the story to find it's end but the same time I want it to continue with more drama in their lives.

But I got to say, the scene where Mel lets go and starts touching Ellie was so sweet but ended abruptly. Damn them thin walls!! Ellie why you do this?!?! Keep it up, it's hard to find sweet and sentimental stories.

Woo! Yeah! keep going! :)

good now post the next one. :)

yay more. can't find any good stories lately so please hurry and update.

woooo keep going.

Aww man, just as I was getting in a groove of reading I reached the most recent chapter. I'm in live this story. It's so sad yet I can't help but hold out waiting for some good and loving connection finally happen. :) Becuase these two obviously are made for each other. Aside from that, great job on fleshing out the characters and environment, also good use of sentence structure and over all well written. Keep up the good work, can't wait for the next chapter, and many more after.

-Mikie

yay you updated. :) are there more soon? i hope so. :)