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for Joel

by Laevi

schedule July 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just the other day I was wondering if anyone had written a story with a protagonist with no legs. I'm so lucky! Perry is sweet and a little excitable. I love your stories but sometimes I wonder if they move too fast. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter!
schedule July 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesome new story you got there Laevi! I feel so bad for Joel; the depression he was feeling must have been overwhelming. Thank God Perry came along to help him out of his gloom.

Can't wait for more! :)
person kylee123
schedule July 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Perry is just what Joel needs to breathe some fresh air into his dreary life. It is important to realize that even if your outside appearance changes, you are still the same person inside and life is worth living. I can understand how realizing that someone is attracted to you could shake someone out of a slump. I actually have a relative who is in the hospital right now to have some toes amputated (again) due to diabetes. It really does cause a deep depression. Good job with this story Laevi.