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April 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Good story and I've enjoyed reading it but I want more. XD Hope to see an update in the near future. Thanks for sharing.
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September 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh this is freaking adorable.
laevi i'm a big fan.
i find myself wondering if you
are like all these big tough men.
lusting and loving little twinks.
i secretly hope you are.
laevi i'm a big fan.
i find myself wondering if you
are like all these big tough men.
lusting and loving little twinks.
i secretly hope you are.
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April 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a fascinating setup! My first thought of Perry was: oh my, another "girl with a penis", but I changed my mind pretty quick. He is fascinating, girlish but not like a girl, and I think extremely confidentand not to worry about his antics.
And Joel - I have to admit that (out of own experience) I find it hard to believe one can be so deep in a depression and come out so quickly and evenly. I would expect Joel to just have lighter moments in the beginning but still be rather down for some time, and even when feeling much better I would expect occasional relapses, if only for minutes or hours. But then we haven't learned very much about his personality yet and I am excited about the further developement.
Hope there will be updates soon!
And Joel - I have to admit that (out of own experience) I find it hard to believe one can be so deep in a depression and come out so quickly and evenly. I would expect Joel to just have lighter moments in the beginning but still be rather down for some time, and even when feeling much better I would expect occasional relapses, if only for minutes or hours. But then we haven't learned very much about his personality yet and I am excited about the further developement.
Hope there will be updates soon!
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January 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
hi! I really enjoy this story and it was awful of you to end it where you did!! Just when Joel & Perry were going to get it on!! I want more!!! Please update this story really soon!!
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January 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i wonder what will happen now
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January 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just love this story, it's so sweet.
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July 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What a nice new fic! Perry is real sweetie, and he's doing wonders for Joel. At the beginning I felt so sorry for Joel but as chapters go on he has got back his spirit. That's so wonderful.
Thank you for this great piece. I'm eagerly waiting more..as always. =)
Thank you for this great piece. I'm eagerly waiting more..as always. =)
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July 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great plot as usual.Can't wait to see what's going to happen next.Hope you'll be able to finish this until vacantion starts XD
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July 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This really is a refreshing story and I certainly look forward to read more of it. Usually squealy, cuddly characters like Perry make me turn round and never come back but I guess Perry's brightness is toned down a little with Joel's situation, so all in all, everything's working out for me :P Thanks for the three chappies and I'll wait for more :)
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July 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Popping in again after reading chap 4, which I found to be quite amusing :P Joel practising on a pillow really made me laugh and the fact that Perry heard it made it even more funny.Those two are indeed quite a pair!
still, there are a few things I'd like to share my thoughts on with you. Please, don't take it as something offending, or me criticising your story, far from it! I just like analyzing things, and the more I like them, the more I analyze.
While reading the whole story so far, I couldn't help but think of Joel before the accident. You clearly said that he was adrenaline junkie who didn't really have time to be with someone, neither a woman nor a man, and when he first saw Perry, he thought of him as 'sissy'. Which would mean that Joel was either straight before *or so he thought* or he was in denial. I'd say the second is closer to truth because I can't see a straight guy falling for another guy, even in Joel's situation. At first I found myself looking sideways when he fell for Perry right off the bat, so to speak. But considering what I just said, that he might have been in denial, it could be possible, nod nod. So, that's the first thing.
The second one is also about Perry, and well, his life. OK, so his accident happened two years before he met Perry, which means two years spent in hospitals and in rehab. Which means jobless. Since he has no family who would support him *also financially* he must be badly in debts now, or barely making ends meet *unless the state provides for him, which I doubt, especially that well, he never let his social worker come to his house and help him* Not to have any kinds of financial problems, Joel would have to have a fortune put aside from his work as a gym trainer.
And the third thing is about Perry, actually :P Is it possible that he had seen Joel before? *pretty impossible considering Joel's lifestyle before Perry popped in* He's acting with so much familiarity that it really makes me think he had maybe seen Joel before. Or he's a really extremely open person, comfortable with calling someone he met three times a 'darling' and 'baby' and not really getting embarrassed hearing Jole's little practice session and them mentioning it to him. Admittedly, I was hoping that he would hear Joel, nod nod, but also was kinda counting on it being revealed a bit later. The whole practice scene, in fact, made me think of a 'what-if' scenario: what if Perry was only acting the way he is out of a good heart towards a handicapped person? Hearing Joel shout his name like this would certainly make him run for the hills, wouldn't it? and even if he didn't, there would be a lot of awkwardness between them and he would not confess so gladly that he did hear everything, I guess.
So all in all *am I even summarizing anything?* I enjoyed the chapter very much and thanks for your hard work so far! Looking forward to another chapter!
teeta
still, there are a few things I'd like to share my thoughts on with you. Please, don't take it as something offending, or me criticising your story, far from it! I just like analyzing things, and the more I like them, the more I analyze.
While reading the whole story so far, I couldn't help but think of Joel before the accident. You clearly said that he was adrenaline junkie who didn't really have time to be with someone, neither a woman nor a man, and when he first saw Perry, he thought of him as 'sissy'. Which would mean that Joel was either straight before *or so he thought* or he was in denial. I'd say the second is closer to truth because I can't see a straight guy falling for another guy, even in Joel's situation. At first I found myself looking sideways when he fell for Perry right off the bat, so to speak. But considering what I just said, that he might have been in denial, it could be possible, nod nod. So, that's the first thing.
The second one is also about Perry, and well, his life. OK, so his accident happened two years before he met Perry, which means two years spent in hospitals and in rehab. Which means jobless. Since he has no family who would support him *also financially* he must be badly in debts now, or barely making ends meet *unless the state provides for him, which I doubt, especially that well, he never let his social worker come to his house and help him* Not to have any kinds of financial problems, Joel would have to have a fortune put aside from his work as a gym trainer.
And the third thing is about Perry, actually :P Is it possible that he had seen Joel before? *pretty impossible considering Joel's lifestyle before Perry popped in* He's acting with so much familiarity that it really makes me think he had maybe seen Joel before. Or he's a really extremely open person, comfortable with calling someone he met three times a 'darling' and 'baby' and not really getting embarrassed hearing Jole's little practice session and them mentioning it to him. Admittedly, I was hoping that he would hear Joel, nod nod, but also was kinda counting on it being revealed a bit later. The whole practice scene, in fact, made me think of a 'what-if' scenario: what if Perry was only acting the way he is out of a good heart towards a handicapped person? Hearing Joel shout his name like this would certainly make him run for the hills, wouldn't it? and even if he didn't, there would be a lot of awkwardness between them and he would not confess so gladly that he did hear everything, I guess.
So all in all *am I even summarizing anything?* I enjoyed the chapter very much and thanks for your hard work so far! Looking forward to another chapter!
teeta