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July 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
no offense but Colan is turning into a selfish self centered prick. who knew he put so much stock into his relationship with the siblings? I always thought he was aware that they were using each other mostly for survival but when it turns out the boy sibling didn't want him in their group he gets all mopey? It doesn't make sense to me.
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July 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Your story is the best....I've read it at least three times already and god knows that I never read a story more than twice.This story is great I really like it.keep it up!And that's my first review on this site which shows how much I appreciate your work!^_^
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July 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD! Mist is class A asshole. Fucker deserves a good beating.
And Vasco is deliciously handsome villain/hero. I like his attitude and thank goodness Col is back with him. I was worried that you were gonna do a time leap like all other stories. Vasco's possessive care is just so hot.
Gor for It. Am waiting for the next update.
And Vasco is deliciously handsome villain/hero. I like his attitude and thank goodness Col is back with him. I was worried that you were gonna do a time leap like all other stories. Vasco's possessive care is just so hot.
Gor for It. Am waiting for the next update.
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July 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 20
Colan in feeling so down trodden and Vasco is practically his knight in shining armor!
I like Vasco more and more. I wonder if he got any revenge on those guys that raped Colan.
Too bad Mist hates Colan, the Farm might have been a home.
Thanks for the updates!
Hope all is well with you!
R
Colan in feeling so down trodden and Vasco is practically his knight in shining armor!
I like Vasco more and more. I wonder if he got any revenge on those guys that raped Colan.
Too bad Mist hates Colan, the Farm might have been a home.
Thanks for the updates!
Hope all is well with you!
R
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July 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Vasco is showing more care to the young fellow. Can't wait for them to go back to Broken city!
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July 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Traxie, thanks for updating so fast! I am really becoming quite fond of Vasco. I am also beginning to believe he is growing a heart thanks to Colan. I hope Vasco punishes Mist for what he has done to Colan. I am worried Mist will come after Colan too. I think Missy will be better off without her twin. She seems like a sweetheart and I am sad for Colan that he believes she doesn't want to be his friend because I think she does love him in her own way. He doesn't need Misty as a friend so should feel like he's lost him as one.
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July 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i would've left too, and i figured mist was going to attack him, but woah, the guy was gonna murder him.
vasco to the rescue again! so, what does vasco want from colan? besides the whole he finds colan interesting, does he want a relationship with colan or something?
vasco to the rescue again! so, what does vasco want from colan? besides the whole he finds colan interesting, does he want a relationship with colan or something?
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July 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Aww Vasco.... He's got it bad! I'm glad that Col finally sees the truth about Mist. Better to know an ugly truth than a pretty lie. I feel bad for him though that he took it that bad. Seems like there's this hole now in his life.... I wonder who can fill it?? Can't wait for the explosives to start going off for the two. It's gonna be epic (or at least in my mind it is) Thanks for the great update! Have fun on your holiday!
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July 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yay you updated! And so soon too. I was having a really horrible day (getting stung by a wasp was icing on the crappy cake) and now im totally happy when i saw you updated:D
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July 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The question is : Why Mist hates Colan so much to the point that he was going to murder him ? my god, this guy is a nut case !!!!! Though I would like to know of his "reasons" to hate Colan... is it jealousy maybe ?