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Oh, traxie! You've made me very, very, very happy today.
I'm so glad and grateful that you've finished FI. I cannot describe how much I love this particular story. The characters are intriguing, the tension between them and the suspense kept me glued to the fic, both character development and plot development are solid and never get boring and your writing style is easy to read but also conveys the depth and weight of the story. With the last couple of chapters after your hiatus, you made me squeal like a little kid getting the toys they always wanted XD

While I really like the ending, I honestly wish to see an epilogue with a bit more of Vasco's caring side. I don't know what you plan to write IF you decide to add an epilogue but I could imagine something like Colan visiting Vasco in his flat, returning to this rather traumatic place but with his new-found feelings for the man, he gets over his fear (more or less), and maybe a bit of smut XD... lol, I think that's just wishful thinking.

Btw, I want to let you know that I've added all three of your stories on AFF to my original slash fics recommendation list. Not many make it there so you know how much I like your works ;) (my personal favourite is FI)

Thank you very much for sharing your story, and whatever you decide to write next, I'll keep my eyes peeled for it! =D
Thanks again and take care!

Waouu ! That was sooo good ! The perfect ending ! I just love it !
It definitly need an epilogue ! Maybe a few months after...
I'm glad Colan is safe from Victor and the others fuckers !
And I can't wait for your new story !! :)
Until then... Take care...

LOVED IT, I almost teared up when i read the ending. Great work, can't wait to read your next story!!!!

I am so proud of Colan and how brave he's been through this whole ordeal. I love Rio and hope that Colan can move next door to him so he would feel safe and then they could see each other all the time. I think once Colan knows those men who raped him won't hurt him again he will be content too. I wish Vasco would tell him he loves him. I hope you are working on a new story too. I love your stories!

Chapters 21-22

Traxie! Wow!

Vasco is showing himself to care about Colan and not to just scare him into
submission! He has no doubt been caring for him the entire time, just not in a way
that didn't intimidate, frighten and humiliate Colan.

Love it when finally Colan is given a place in their society, (everybody just wants/needs a place
to fit in ~ I believe).

Love Rio! Very easy to love him.

Thank you!
R

Vasco is becoming more appealing and sexy as his gentleness show. Our little young chap is also unconsciously feeling more comfortable with him. Great progress.

Woah so I was looking back at some other reviews and I noticed someone accused colan of being selfish O.O well that's mind boggling lol h's the least selfish of any character in his story.. I lik can't even believe that was a though in someone's head O.o

Anyway this chapter was really good an plot development wise it made me really happy... I'm glad colan is getting more comfortable with his position in this society and with his new job.. He deserves nothing less. I guess I was just worried that he'd have trouble handling everything cuz I'm pretty sure he's suffering some level of PTSD.. Looking forward to the next update :)

Hopefully colan will get even more settled than before ;p

Btw the review I was referring to was from the update right before this one

It's true Vasco was a real bastard with the boy, but nobody talk about the men who raped him !
I don't remember if they were punished !?
Vasco has a very bad reputation. Maybe it's true Colan is lucky to be alive...
Thanks for the update :))

SWEET!!! I am so glad he's got a place to belong to now! I'm just wondering what happened to Vasco.... I'm also wondering if that guy Vic and his croneys are out of the picture yet as well??? read ya laters!!!