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September 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Vasco has a lot to answer for. Losing your humanity does not make you a better person.
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September 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
loving the story so far, but... if i wish on a star, can we get longer chapters??? please, with a cherry on top!!!
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September 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
WOW! boy oh boy, i hate cruelty but IM TOTALLY DIGGING THIS.
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August 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please please please ... We need an update! T.T
My imagination is killing me with all the possibilities of what could happen next???! O.O
Please update ... (puppy eyes begging) ^,^
My imagination is killing me with all the possibilities of what could happen next???! O.O
Please update ... (puppy eyes begging) ^,^
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August 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
WOW ... as impressive as ever!!! I mean that's you and another story of you! No one can expect any less! ^_^
I am shivering! Istead of Colan!! Jee... what a ruthless guy! I s he the one that will take a liking of Col?! Poor Col! His wounds will get infected ... I mean that's the least! with what they've done to Seff's cousin. it's nothing!
Ahhh, can't wait to read more! You are a master to make us intimidate by your stories and characters :P
Please edit it the next chapter soon. and forgotten too! :P now I have 2 stories to look up too ^_^
Thanks again xoxo
I am shivering! Istead of Colan!! Jee... what a ruthless guy! I s he the one that will take a liking of Col?! Poor Col! His wounds will get infected ... I mean that's the least! with what they've done to Seff's cousin. it's nothing!
Ahhh, can't wait to read more! You are a master to make us intimidate by your stories and characters :P
Please edit it the next chapter soon. and forgotten too! :P now I have 2 stories to look up too ^_^
Thanks again xoxo
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August 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
amazing!!! the story contains the right amount of suspence, descriptions, dialogues and storyplot... and I LOVE STRONG CHARACTERS!!
can't wait to read more :)
can't wait to read more :)
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August 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OH no, please don`t tell me, that he`s the one for Colan...but he has dark brown eyes and
he already gave him a "sweet" nickname,so I think he is.He is a meanie,
to cane someone so hard because he`s hungry, nearly starved and desperate. Colan only stole a little can of
beans, that should have told him enough. He didn`t carried a bag full of goodies...tz.
And again my heart is bleeding for one of your characters, you`re so good...:)
So, what`s the name of Sir wonderful and kind?
Love these story!
lg, Jules
he already gave him a "sweet" nickname,so I think he is.He is a meanie,
to cane someone so hard because he`s hungry, nearly starved and desperate. Colan only stole a little can of
beans, that should have told him enough. He didn`t carried a bag full of goodies...tz.
And again my heart is bleeding for one of your characters, you`re so good...:)
So, what`s the name of Sir wonderful and kind?
Love these story!
lg, Jules
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August 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
omg i really really liked that chapter, i already cant wait for more, please update very sooon!!! :)
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August 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
WOW! This story is awesome! I can`t wait to read more!!
I wonder what will happen next?!
Thanks alot for the great story!
I wonder what will happen next?!
Thanks alot for the great story!
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August 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ouch ! Poor boy ! The leader has a thing for discipline...
I hope their next meeting is not going to hurt so much... Colan is very stubborn...
Thanks for the fast update ! You're the best ! :))
I hope their next meeting is not going to hurt so much... Colan is very stubborn...
Thanks for the fast update ! You're the best ! :))