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September 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! I just realized that you were the one writting this! Now I feel sooooo stupid. I'm so glad to see you have another piece! I love your characters (although I have Mist and Missy...such nasty personalities...I want to kick them in the ass). I hope things get better for Colan...though knowing your pieces and the summary I suspect it shall get worse before it gets better.
~Sal
~Sal
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September 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story. Please keep it coming.
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September 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hm, I don`t know what to say.
Vasco (nice name) is the devil, a lunatic par excellence.
I didn`t thought anyone could top Keeran...how naive.:)
Colan needs a break. What about his wounds and infections?
The man who asked Colan all these questions is a mole, isn`t he?
Please don`t kill Seff, somebody has to look after his family! But don´t bother with the
twins, they can rot...hihi.
You`re the best, please update soon.
Vasco (nice name) is the devil, a lunatic par excellence.
I didn`t thought anyone could top Keeran...how naive.:)
Colan needs a break. What about his wounds and infections?
The man who asked Colan all these questions is a mole, isn`t he?
Please don`t kill Seff, somebody has to look after his family! But don´t bother with the
twins, they can rot...hihi.
You`re the best, please update soon.
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September 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me you have more of this story finished and waiting to be put up. I want more! Can you put me on an email list for this one too?
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September 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
my god i hate cliff hangers they always leave you dying for more.... so more more please i really like this story cant wait for more!!!!
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September 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You've spoiled us ! I love it when you post twice a week ! :))
So, his name is Vasco ? And he's got himself a pet ?!
Poor Colan...
By the way, you didn't give us a description of Colan ? Maybe in a late chapter ?
So, his name is Vasco ? And he's got himself a pet ?!
Poor Colan...
By the way, you didn't give us a description of Colan ? Maybe in a late chapter ?
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September 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwe Poor Colan!! He's all beat up! *sniff* Vasco is evil lol
I wonder what he did to Seff? And what does he want with Colan now? I hope he doesn't beat him up anytime soon!
He's already pretty messed up! >_<
I truly LOVE this story! I can't wait for more Vasco and Colan!
Thanks alot for the fantastic update! I can't wait for the next one! xxx
I wonder what he did to Seff? And what does he want with Colan now? I hope he doesn't beat him up anytime soon!
He's already pretty messed up! >_<
I truly LOVE this story! I can't wait for more Vasco and Colan!
Thanks alot for the fantastic update! I can't wait for the next one! xxx
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September 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
omg please update soon!!!! :D
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September 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This story is awesomee!! I absolutley love your story Forgotten, and I just stumbled upon this one. Please update soon! I have to know what happens next!
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September 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG! you're so good at keeping people on the edge, at conveying anxiety, anger and fear. I felt like I was inside that dungeon while reading, afraid of whatever will happen next. It felt so real!
Can't wait to see how Vasco will treat our Colan. I hope V. won't terrorize him to death: I like his rebellious (in thoughts at least) but gentle spirit too much for that to happen.
THANK YOU FOR SHARING!!!
Can't wait to see how Vasco will treat our Colan. I hope V. won't terrorize him to death: I like his rebellious (in thoughts at least) but gentle spirit too much for that to happen.
THANK YOU FOR SHARING!!!