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It's true ! Vasco is very mysterious ! You said he is a leader but he doesn't live in a castle or something...
Even if he has luxury like hot water...
And how does he know about the boy's friends ? Who told him ?
Aahhgg ! Can't wait for more update... :)
Thanks for sharing...

OMGOMGOMG!!!! An update! I'm so freakin' happy now!

Awee poor little Colan! I really like him! He's so cute! *hugs him* but really why does he always need to do something to have Vasco's wraith? I know that he doesn't need to do much for Vasco to be angry at him but he should know that he's playing with fire when he yells at Vasco!

This story of yours is beyond awesome! I wish you wouldn't need to do any editing so I could read it all in one shot! lol :)

Thanks

This story started out interesting. It had a plot and I was always anticipating reading the next chapter to see what is going to happen to this individual in this desolate, cruel world you had created. But, ever since Vasco tortured him in ch. 3 in the dungeons, all that has been happening since then is Vasco torturing him using various methods and moving him to his place to torture and then moving him back to the dungeons to torture and then moving him back to Vasco's private home to torture again. Is all this torturing supposed to be significant? Maybe 3 long chapters max of torturing, if you REALLY felt that all this torturing would give readers an insight to future problems but, 6 chapters of the daily torture of 'the Brat' has become quite mundane and repititive. I'm starting to wonder why this isn't titled 'The Daily Life of the Ignored Prisoner'? The story has come to a standstill. The plot is not moving forward. It's just stuck in a rut. There seems to be no hope of any changes.

MORE! I know I know, humans can only write so fast but I cant get enough of this story and I cant wait to find out what happens next!

Wow, ignored not ignored which is better- still though sounds like society is dying.

love this story. please keep cranking it out :)

emm... just like Colan I don't know what to make of Vasco!!! The reality that this is his job to get rid of any nuisance is not a mystery to us and I can have feelings for him because while doing so (killing/torturing) he still has some sense to not through a kid in that dungeon for good!!! and as he said he is reluctant to kill a kid!

Somehow I guess he is going beyond his limits to keep Colan out of harm ways although he is inflicting some of his own but again I guess he was alone long enough that can cause his cold attitude! and now the question that keep repeating in my mind is how come a man like Vasco has ended up in a job like this?! He is not enjoying it! I can see it 3 times until now! or maybe more!

You know I just love your bad characters in Pain and Pain, in Forgotten and now in this fiction! They are all different but at the same time similar! They are bad but not in nature! Do I even make sense?! I hope so! English as a second language and my English is not half as good as yours! :P

Anyway, enjoy this chapter a lot! It was nice to see that after making his point he went and brought Colan again and that didn't leave him there to rot! Clean him, warm him, ... he is taking care of Colan in his own way ... roughly!

But how can he know about the twins?! Did the other guy told him about them?! or is it that went through the trouble to investigate about Colan's whereabouts?! hmm... mystery mystery ... :D

I am craving for more ... so yes, please do edit the next chapter as soon as possible ^_^ arigattoooooo

about freakin time sheesh. It's a well duh sorta thing. If you abuse an already injured body and don't keep it warm or feed it of course it's going to get freakin sick. Man obviously knows bugger all about pet care.

I`m curious about these meal bars. I know these protein bars (chocolate, banana...) but they`re
really tasty, so those can`t be the one Colan gets.I bet he gets freeze-dried meat ones, like the nasty
stuff for astronauts...yak. But that also means lots of essential nutrients for starved, poor Colan...-cheers-:)
The backhand beside, Vasco acted nearly human in this chapter. But I know,not to build up false hopes. Colan is in for
it the moment he recovers a little bit. His stubborn, rebellious site will see to it. I can`t wait for the first escape attempt.
So Colan lies beside the bed now, like a real pet should...hehe. And he has a blanket and something to lie on, water and food (somehow).
A little bit of healing ointment and a nice wash and Colan should survive.I`m pleased.:)
Thanks for the fast update.
Now I`m eagerly waiting for the next chapter of Forgotten.
Greetings, Jules

wow, another chapter!!! oh, finally he's showing his feisty side, while Vasco his somewhat caring side!!

you certainly made my day!! it's been a while since last time any of the stories I've been following got updated.
This story and a few (very very very few) others get updated regularly and quite often. :3