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January 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh, he was checking to see if he had raped the kid during the night. fuck. scary. makes me nervous.
ok, air vents. crawl through those damn things till you find a way out of the building. right right? escape.
need to know more about this society and how things are run, and a clearer view of the ignored.
if hes been punished then why is being kept by vasco?
does this society condone slavery? the collar............
maybe this infos in an earlier chapter but i just dont remember.
update QUICKLY. worried for the kid....
ok, air vents. crawl through those damn things till you find a way out of the building. right right? escape.
need to know more about this society and how things are run, and a clearer view of the ignored.
if hes been punished then why is being kept by vasco?
does this society condone slavery? the collar............
maybe this infos in an earlier chapter but i just dont remember.
update QUICKLY. worried for the kid....
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January 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ok forget the air vents! rio is this kids ticket out of there! if he keeps up this terrified bunny thing up, the doc will totally go against vas and get the kid out. i totally see it happening, the docs to kind, too caring to let this scared kid stay with vas, and he seemed sickened by the fact that vas collared the kid too............ come on colan, bat your eyes at rio and ask him to help you!
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January 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You spoiled us !! :)
Thank you !
Poor, poor boy ! I keep repeating it but it's true ! He's so terrified of Vasco...
(Who has the sensibility of a wall) !! ^^'
Rio was a doctor or perhaps a male nurse before the war ?
Can't wait for more... :)
Thank you !
Poor, poor boy ! I keep repeating it but it's true ! He's so terrified of Vasco...
(Who has the sensibility of a wall) !! ^^'
Rio was a doctor or perhaps a male nurse before the war ?
Can't wait for more... :)
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January 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh gosh! Thanks alot for the updates!!!! They were GREAT!
And I, just like all the others, can't wait to see a gentler side of Vasco (toward Colan of course lol)! When will he realize that he's torturing the poor boy?? When will he give him some food and something to do other then sleep and|or be terrified all day?? Poor poor Colan! I wish I could give him a good meal (even if I'm not much of a good cook) lol And anyways why the hell did Vasco fingered Colan?? Did he intend to rape him but stopped or something else??
Plz more soon! I can't wait for more!
And I, just like all the others, can't wait to see a gentler side of Vasco (toward Colan of course lol)! When will he realize that he's torturing the poor boy?? When will he give him some food and something to do other then sleep and|or be terrified all day?? Poor poor Colan! I wish I could give him a good meal (even if I'm not much of a good cook) lol And anyways why the hell did Vasco fingered Colan?? Did he intend to rape him but stopped or something else??
Plz more soon! I can't wait for more!
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January 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! Thanks thanks thanks xoxoxoxox
Ohoh! Vasco was afraid that he might had raped Colan?! lol It was sort of interesting that he felt worried and guilty of doing such an act!!! O.o I thought he wouldn't think twice about it but apparently he at least care that much! O.O
but I was thinking how there is going to be a scene between these two?! I mean the "start"! Vasco didn't show any desire for Colan up until now and I guess this should be start ... :) and if I am not mistaken, Colan was checking Vasco out the other day! :D
and I'm wondering ... which version of Colan, Vasco like more?! the arrogant brat or the terrified one?!!! I guess the arrogant one! :P
On the other hand, I don't know how long Colan last with his current diet?! O.o He is ought to collapse some time soon! :(
Thanks again, really thankssss ^_^ and well we are waiting for Devin and Keeran as well ;)
Ohoh! Vasco was afraid that he might had raped Colan?! lol It was sort of interesting that he felt worried and guilty of doing such an act!!! O.o I thought he wouldn't think twice about it but apparently he at least care that much! O.O
but I was thinking how there is going to be a scene between these two?! I mean the "start"! Vasco didn't show any desire for Colan up until now and I guess this should be start ... :) and if I am not mistaken, Colan was checking Vasco out the other day! :D
and I'm wondering ... which version of Colan, Vasco like more?! the arrogant brat or the terrified one?!!! I guess the arrogant one! :P
On the other hand, I don't know how long Colan last with his current diet?! O.o He is ought to collapse some time soon! :(
Thanks again, really thankssss ^_^ and well we are waiting for Devin and Keeran as well ;)
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January 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well, you definitely make my YEAR! :D
Happy New Year! I wish it would be better than all the rest for you ^_^
emmm, I guess now I can understand why you named this story Forever Ignored! I was wondering what would be the point of keeping him alive if Vasco is going to ignore the very fact that he is there, that he is a being and all????!!! Just let him die!
You know he is not even playing with Colan so that I can assume he just kept him alive for fun or amusement or God knows what?!
The new character is ... strange?! I can't tell whether I like him or dislike him! But it seems Vasco likes him and it seems they are in a relationship!
I guess I have to wait and see :D
Thanks again for the update ;)
Happy New Year! I wish it would be better than all the rest for you ^_^
emmm, I guess now I can understand why you named this story Forever Ignored! I was wondering what would be the point of keeping him alive if Vasco is going to ignore the very fact that he is there, that he is a being and all????!!! Just let him die!
You know he is not even playing with Colan so that I can assume he just kept him alive for fun or amusement or God knows what?!
The new character is ... strange?! I can't tell whether I like him or dislike him! But it seems Vasco likes him and it seems they are in a relationship!
I guess I have to wait and see :D
Thanks again for the update ;)
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January 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
keep it going. although im hopen things will start lookin up for the kid, and we find out more about this society, and the ignored. and boy o boy, vasco is one mean fuck.
question; are the ignored sort of like the homeless in our society, but they are looked down, because, what, those society people think the ignored want to live outside the rules, not get a job, or be a respectable citizen?
thats the only reason i can think of for vasco acting like the ignored boy should be treated so cruelly.
is there even anything/program in that society where ignored can become like a citizen, get a job so they can provide for themselves? irk. i dont know. looking forward to more.
question; are the ignored sort of like the homeless in our society, but they are looked down, because, what, those society people think the ignored want to live outside the rules, not get a job, or be a respectable citizen?
thats the only reason i can think of for vasco acting like the ignored boy should be treated so cruelly.
is there even anything/program in that society where ignored can become like a citizen, get a job so they can provide for themselves? irk. i dont know. looking forward to more.
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January 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
hey wb. writers block is a bitch.
Anyway, not at this rate he wont. As for vas, well dah the kid was stealing. how else is he going to eat, it's not like there are job options out there.
sure vas can afford to be all judgmental cause it wasn't him starving... mid you the kids still gonna starve if he keeps this up. even with his shrunken belly, he needs more than just that to heal... or maybe vas wants him weak. Less trouble that way neh?
Anyway, not at this rate he wont. As for vas, well dah the kid was stealing. how else is he going to eat, it's not like there are job options out there.
sure vas can afford to be all judgmental cause it wasn't him starving... mid you the kids still gonna starve if he keeps this up. even with his shrunken belly, he needs more than just that to heal... or maybe vas wants him weak. Less trouble that way neh?
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January 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
can't get enough of this story. love every chapter and every chapter feels not nearly enough to satisfy the growing anticipation for what's to come next.
:) as always, will be hoping in an early update
:) as always, will be hoping in an early update
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January 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It's awesome to see another update from this story! Another great chapter.. I feel so bad for the poor kid, but it's really good writing. I kind of hope Vasco secretly does care about his well-being, he is occasionally, um, not excessively rough? I also wonder why Vasco is keeping him in the first place. Some kind of rehabilitation thing, or did he actually feel a little bit bad for him? So interesting! Thanks for the update, and I hope you find the time to update again soon!