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for Forever Ignored

by traxie

schedule January 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
man, there's going to be hell to pay when vas catches those bastards. still, vas was a lot gentler with him than i expected but it's a major step back for the kid. He's not going to trust anyone now.
person lea
schedule January 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
biiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiig thank you

I really love your writing!
keep going on :D
schedule January 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
another cliffie T_T I love this story, it feels like Christmas every time i see a chapter.
person Gwilt
schedule January 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is so compelling. My heart's been in my mouth reading the last few chapters especially. I'm intrigued to know what Vasco's up to.

And I'm impressed you're managing to update both this and Forgotten: you're really spoiling us.
person dazedandconfused
schedule January 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well, another cliffy but not quite as bad as the previous chapter.

I kind of wished that Vasco had walked in as they were raping Colan so that at least the kid would have known he had nothing to do with his 'punishment' and saved him even more pain from being put back into the 'box' only to have to wait for what would happen next. As it is now, he thinks Vasco gave his permission to them and I hate that he feels that way. Vasco is still a total A-hole and I want to knock him on the head with something. I will give him this, he was a little bit more kinder to Colan.

I would think by now that Colan's tears would start to get to Vasco, like melting his cold heart.

I want to see Vasco inflict swift justice to those jerks who did this to Colan and for Brat to know he had nothing to do with what happened to him.

Update again, soon, pretty please.
person miles
schedule January 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I don't know what he's trying to do but, clearly, he isn't a psychologist !!
Poor boy needn't that !
Vasco survived the war so he has to have some skill... He's very hard and maybe it's why he is on top !
Colan need a break ! ^^'

Thanks for the fast update !! :))
schedule January 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*hugs* I love you! Thanks 4 the update and Im so glad Vasco didnt blame Colan for what happened and is trying to help him
person Leah
schedule January 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
God, you're a bloody genius. I love the story and characters. Hopefully the next chapter won't be too far away (hint-hint?)
person oo
schedule January 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh my lord. im shaking.
person sugargirl89
schedule January 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, talk about intense! Great chapter, very well written and very dramatic.