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January 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
omg!!! please let that have been a set up by vasco to see if that had been one of the men that hurt colan.
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January 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
well sheesh, what a bloody stupid question to ask. 'why r you panicking' indeed. I dunno, maybe cause he was RAPED AND BEATEN! seriously.
man, your boys just can't catch a break can they. I surprised he hasn't come down with a fever or gone into shock from that little effort.
I hope for something truly nasty in 'vic's' future.
man, your boys just can't catch a break can they. I surprised he hasn't come down with a fever or gone into shock from that little effort.
I hope for something truly nasty in 'vic's' future.
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January 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
noooooooooooooooo
evil cliffy!
I crave every word you write, so awesome
THANKS!
evil cliffy!
I crave every word you write, so awesome
THANKS!
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January 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
My only complaint is that "Colan" sounds like "colon"
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January 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ah! What a cliffhanger! Wonderful to hear you have "mojo" on forgotton, can't wait for updates on all your stories :)
XoXo
XoXo
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January 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Nooooo! I hope it won't be too long of an update until the next chapter! I'm anxious to know what happens next. Love the story as usual and looking forward to the next chapter.
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January 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
nooooooo, you cant leave it there, i need to know watt happens, please more soon!!!
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January 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh MA GOD!!!! A HUGEMONGOUS CLIFFIE!!!!!!!! 8/ darn your good. Dont let Vic get him! Argh Vasco you daft git!
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January 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Dont worry about editing ur alimightyness! We're all happy as long as you dont abandon the story!!! Its to good to stop now!
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January 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I find great parallels in your characters from Forgotten and Forever Ignored. You seem to like the dominant, aggressive, ill tempered seme type (with a possible soft core whose existence has yet to be proved or found) and the 'scared to death' through his life-altering experiences, PTSD uke type. Not that it's a bad thing. I actually very much like the above mentioned seme type. And the severe mental state of the other half seems to guarantee a long, longer ongoing story. Nevertheless I kinda wish for some more development/progress in your other story, Forgotten. I'm not at that point here yet, with Forever Ignored.
Now that may sound too negative so please believe me when I tell you that I DO enjoy reading both your ongoing stories very much.
I think of three scenarios for Vas's behavior:
1. Vic lured Vas away with a random story and told him he could keep an eye on Colan so long (so he could be alone with him). Vas is unknowing of his involvement in the rape and has no qualms leaving the two alone. The result for Colan does not look pretty.
2. Vas has a suspicion about Vic's involvement and set a trap for him. Naturally, hopefully he will come to Colan's rescue in time.
3. Vas doesn't give a shit and indeed gave Colan away to the men for free usage. Now Vic came around for a second round and Vas has no prob granting it.
Now I know which choice I prefer and which is most likely (and both isn't No.3) but I won't tell haha.
What I kind of not really understand is Vas's behavior after the rape in general. I really don't think he wants to rape Colan as well but does he seriously expect the form of 'shock' therapy he is using on Colan is going to help so short after the trauma? Like always keeping him in fear of it happening again by his actions (the forceful body contacts), does he think this way Colan will open up or what? Surely not. And I do believe he is an intelligent man so this makes me wonder about his tactics even more. He must know it doesn't help so what is his agenda???
*sigh* Please update soon! As you can see your story causes me to speculate a lot (which is a good thing because it keeps me interested even more :)))
Now that may sound too negative so please believe me when I tell you that I DO enjoy reading both your ongoing stories very much.
I think of three scenarios for Vas's behavior:
1. Vic lured Vas away with a random story and told him he could keep an eye on Colan so long (so he could be alone with him). Vas is unknowing of his involvement in the rape and has no qualms leaving the two alone. The result for Colan does not look pretty.
2. Vas has a suspicion about Vic's involvement and set a trap for him. Naturally, hopefully he will come to Colan's rescue in time.
3. Vas doesn't give a shit and indeed gave Colan away to the men for free usage. Now Vic came around for a second round and Vas has no prob granting it.
Now I know which choice I prefer and which is most likely (and both isn't No.3) but I won't tell haha.
What I kind of not really understand is Vas's behavior after the rape in general. I really don't think he wants to rape Colan as well but does he seriously expect the form of 'shock' therapy he is using on Colan is going to help so short after the trauma? Like always keeping him in fear of it happening again by his actions (the forceful body contacts), does he think this way Colan will open up or what? Surely not. And I do believe he is an intelligent man so this makes me wonder about his tactics even more. He must know it doesn't help so what is his agenda???
*sigh* Please update soon! As you can see your story causes me to speculate a lot (which is a good thing because it keeps me interested even more :)))