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Poor Colan, I bet Vic is there to intimidate him.
I´m sure Vasco doesn`t know, that Vic was one of the men who
raped Colan, so he asked him to keep an eye on him, while he`s gone.
Maybe Vic gave him a false information, he wants to lure him away...
Again, I can`t believe that Vasco gave Colan to these bastards!

And Vascos behavior is really strange...for him.If he`s trying to help Ciolan with his panic attacks,
(is he trying to calm him?is he trying to be tender???)
then he should reconsider his way of doing so.
Please update soon, I don`t care about any mistakes, woulden`t notice/recognize them anyway...:()

Greetings, Jules

I swear to all that's Holy, if Vas blames Colan for anything else that happens I am going to strangle him. I hope that Vic can't pull Colan out from under the bed and that Vas walks back in (and sees what's going on) but doesn't punish Colan for not behaving. Obviously, Colan is afraid and I don't understand why Vas can't see what's going on by Colan's reactions and it's because he's in the same room as his rapist! Open your dam eyes Vas and use your brain for once!!! Doesn't Vas want to know who took Colan from the box he had put in him and then savagely raped and attacked him? Is he even trying to find out or does he just not care? Vas really confuses me and I don't know what makes him tick. The way he is punished Colan for just stealing a little food and trying to survive makes me sick and disgusted.

Please update this and Forgotten as soon as you can but I am begging you to start going easy on Colan since he's been through enough and I don't know how much more his mental state can take before he cracks for good.

Mistakes or not its a good chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next. I think this is my favorite story you've done. I really hope Vas comes back in time to catch his friend doing something and doesn't just get made at Colan for hiding. I hope to Colan will be able to tell him what happened and maybe ask what he did to deserve it.

I don't understand why Vasco keeps pushing him like this. He must know something happens. He is really confusing me, at some times he seems to care and than the next he is cold hearted and mean.

You are confusing me :(

but still an amazing story like always. I am already longing for the next chapter...

Man how can you leave us hanging like that, its so mean, I wanna know what happens next. Hurry up and update please, the suspense is just too much. Please don't let Vic rape him again, thats just too brutal, let Vasco come back quickly and beat the crap out of Vic.

0.0 Oh my gosh!!! You just LOVE putting me on edge don't you? Ohhhhh another great chapter and another mind bending cliffy! I demand more!.... Pretty Please? with sugar on top?

OMG ! So angsty ! All the chapter !
You're very good at that !! ^^'
(it's a compliment !)
Almost too much for me ! Poor boy !
Vasco can be more complacent !! Or, it's a trap or something ! Please, tell me he'll come back !!
You have to update very soon... Hope so ! :)

I started tearing up when I read this chapter! Why is Vas doing that to Colan?! I have given up on trying to figure him out.

Hope you update soon! You've been spoiling us. :)

I swear that if that bastard Vic rapes poor Colan again I am going to jump into story and kill him myself (and believe me it will be a very slow and painful death plus he will end up not having his bits attched when he dies!) since Vas is too much of coward and bully himself to protect what is supposedly his own property. What is it with Vas, he knows Colan was raped (or does he?) and that's the reason why the kid is so scared but he keeps acting like he is going to rape Colan himself. Why would he leave Vic in the same room with Colan and what did he come to tell Vas that was so important he left him all alone with Colan? Doesn't he know that Colan thinks that Vas allowed his rape to happen with his so called friends and is doing it again! I seriously hope Colan doesn't get raped again and the Vas or even Rio saves him. PLEASE DON'T HURT COLAN ANYMORE AND HAVE VAS KILL VIC AND THE OTHERS WHO RAPED HIM. Why doesn't Vas (who is supposed to be a leader and smart) know the reason why Colan is behaving the way he is and give him a break. Yeah, he's been being nicer to him but still threatening.

UPDATE AGAIN SOON, PRETTY PLEASE.

I also want to read another chapter of Forgotten too!

Oh, by the way, I love the avatar picture of your kitty you have up under your author panel. I have an orange and white male domesticated short haired cat named "Kitty", LOL.