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for Forever Ignored

by traxie

person oo
schedule January 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
thats messed up... vasco is turning out to be a real let down...
good to see col ask that question, of how much longer hes to be punished, how much more will they hurt him for just for a couple of cans.
person clovermax
schedule January 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
What a bleak world. No children, no forgiveness Poor Colan -when will his abuse stop. Thank you for posting - love it.
schedule January 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
if he gets raped again I really hope Vasco catches the asshole while in the act
person rivers24
schedule January 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Vas is gonna come save him right?!! hes really not gonna let this just happen again?!! omg update soon!
person Anon
schedule January 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I am begging you not to let Collin get hurt again by that asshole and that Vascho comes back and saves him but doens't get mad or blame him for doing anything wrong. Please don't let him get rapped again and i hope that Vascho lets Collin know he never told those men to rape him. UPATE UPDATE UPDATE PLEASE WHNE YOU HVAVE A CHANCE.
person Anon
schedule January 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far!:)I like how you're showing how while Vasco isn't all cuddly and loving, he isn't too bad at times. I have to wonder why he left the poor boy with Vic though. Is it a trap or is he just screwed...again? I hope Vasco finds out that Calon thought he allowed the men to rape and beat him. Hopefully, Vasco would be able to allay his fears then. I think that's what Vasco is trying to do now. Trying to show Calon that even being close to him like that, Vasco won't hurt him. At least, that's what I'm guessing. I'm not sure since Vasco hasn't explained himself yet. He seems worried about Calon though, even though he doesn't do a good job of showing it and I hope that Vasco and him can get closer and Vasco will at least be a little nicer. Can't wait for the next update!:)
person klalista
schedule January 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
NO.
NO
NO
NONONO
D:

^ My reaction when I hit last chapter...

Forever Ignored is such a good story <3 I don't usually like rape fics because the authors always overplayed the aftereffects of rape and it usually has me going, "Oh god, I get it, you got raped. It's been twelve chapters, get over it plz." And I know that sounds callous, but come on. Those were twelve long chapters...

But you do it in a way that has me going "OH GOD NO COLAN NO!" instead of, "k, time to get over it bro. this is too emo for me D:"

And everything else is awesome <3333 even vasco, the dickbag.

Anyways, I saw you mention a way to be informed about updates or the like, but I can't find anything about it :c
person Morgana_Pendragon
schedule January 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please don't let that evil bastard hurt Colan again and have Vasco torture Vic for even touching him. Update soon. I would also be eternally grateful for you to update Forgotten as well.
person Megan
schedule January 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I am a new reader and just started reading this story which I think is epic and you are truly a very gifted writer. There are not many stories that make me cry or my soul to ache for a character but for this particular story I do feel that way for Colan.

I am just curious about something and wanted to mention it. You originally updated this story on July 20, 2011 and put the following note (which I copied and pasted below) in first chapter.

This was my Nanowrimo 2009 project. It is not completely finished yet but I have the ending planned, it is just a matter of writing it.

My main focus is on my story Forgotten now, but I have eighteen chapters of this story already written and I will post them one by one once I've edited them.

I guess I am confused as to why you haven't posted the remaining four chapters sooner since they are already written unless you haven't had the time to edit them. I was just curious as to what happened but the story is well worth waiting for in the end.

Thanks for sharing and I look forward to reading the rest of it and hope that Colan finds happiness and love by the end.
person paputsza
schedule January 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
poor little brat. What's Vasco up to in the first place.