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you wrote the chapter really good ok...In those times it must of been very hard, not that they are not now,...thing have changed but all there yet....thanks for the update and see you soon.!1!!!

I'm always ecstatic when I see a new chapter...Hurrah!! This chapter is wonderful... I feel all the misery that Lauchlan is experiencing and your setting descriptions are perfect... I even felt the cold and wet...and that's pretty awesome since I live in Blistering Hot South Texas. Can't wait for more.... please.

Thank you for the update, I had thought you had forgotten it...Chapter was good, the kids kinda scared me a little.. I thought they were going to do something bad to him....see you soon with another update !!!!!!!!

Poor Lauchlan...He is so very much deserving of a "break". Please give him the courage to ask Corbin to return...Lauchlan is in desperate need of that man. I want them both to be happy...and I still want to see Lauchlan really whip those Urchins into shape. They need to be taught to respect him...those little whippersnappers!!
I really do love this story. The way you describe everything in such detail has me believing that I am standing in the midst of the action. Incredible and exciting!

*hugs Lauchlan tightly, gives him a kiss on the forehead, and murmurs words of comfort* Poor Lauchlan, what a traumatic experience, I've been giving my cockatoo the stink for about 5 minutes now. Corbin should've stayed and Lauchlan should've asked him to stay! Oh Lauchlan you big coward, man up and go for what you want! Gay Romance would be so much easier for men if they had a miniature women on their shoulder whispering in their ear. Nonetheless great chapter, though I did have to skim through Lachlan's experience with one eye open.

Amazing use of the word pachyderm! I'm a little in love with you right now.

I just spent last night and most of the day reading this story, and I love it!!!!! I love basically everything about this story! I love the names, Lauchlan is such a brilliant name! (btw is it pronounced Lock-lan or another way) I also love the fact that Lauchlan and Corbin are not two drop dead gorgeous men. The stories I read are usually filled with them, so it was very refreshing to read about these too. Lauchlan is just too cute, I love the whole big-awkward-fumbling-man thing he was going on. He is so insecure about himself, and it makes him so irresistible and you just instantly love him. I also love how Corbin doesn't know how to truly express himself and hide behind the whole mean guy personality. Theit interactions with each other are very endearing and I truly hope the best for them and I hope they have a happy ending, though I am kinda scared for the violence next chapter, I think Corbin and Lauchlan truly need each other, they just need to realize it!!! I reeeaaaalllllyyyyy hope you update soon!!! I can't wait for the next chapter, you are such an amazing author :)

I love this story and I am always overjoyed when I see a new chapter. I hope you will have Lachlan heed Corbin's advice and Kick those useless urchin workers of his into shape.
The chemistry between these 2 gentlemen smoulders!! YUM!! I can't wait for the next chapter. :)

I love this! I wonder what happens to their relationship after the snow storm. I'm looking forward for more chapters. I can't wait to see how their relationship builds up. Keep writing! :)

well i'm expecting to see some very satisfied men the next chapter.