rate_review Reviews

This was another great chapter! Though you were arguing about the plot moving and not just having it as a flashback chapter, but it totally was just a flashback chapter XD. I'm interested in a bit more about how everything works, so I can hardly way to see how it's all going to be explained. Well good job~!

Another good job, it was a nice filler chapter to get the traveling on the way. I feel sorry for Cavan D8. I can hardly wait for another update when possible~

Another wonderful chapter darling. I wonder if it hurt you to write that sex scene XD; . Maybe that's when your back started hurting, loool. Anyway, I really like how descriptive you get, and I'm even more glad that this seems to be evolving wonderfully.

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Though this better not be THAT story with other stories combined too...I have no idea how you're going to make this just even more wonderful, but good luck. I'm very interested in finding out more back story and seeing the characters evolve. Thank you so much honey

Wow sweetie, this is a wonderful start. It's so full of wonderful mystery and I really enjoyed the descriptions of the characters and how obvious you put your soul into giving them their own personalities. I'm very curious on how you intend to continue this, this seems like a very good story.

A little grammar/spelling mistakes but I guess that'd be my fault for subtly trying to hurrying you XD, and I was a bit confused on one part but that may just need to be re-read on my own, hahaha. But anyway, I'm looking forward to more sweetie~