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October 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well that was a nice smut filled chapter. Good job. I'm curious on what's wrong with Cavan's dream and I'm just overly interested in what the reasoning might be just for this chapter entirely. But thank you, can't wait for more.
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September 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
DUUUUUUUDE, THAT F'ING BLOWS. It's nice to see more of the characters in the same chapter, but WOW. That blows so hardcore. Cavan does NOT deserve this shit man D8.
But yay, another innovative update~
But yay, another innovative update~
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September 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear, oh my, oh dang. Poor Cavan, he really goes through a lot of crap. Such bull crap! Very tense, I'm on the edge of my seat!
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September 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh snap! A lot happened that chapter didn't it? Awesome job sweetie! And oh snap! What terrible things happening all around!
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August 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Whoo, a daring escape for our awesome heroes! I'm interested and peeked at Ai's 'dream' and I just wonder how it's going to be :). Ahaha, poor Eira, having so many weird abilities and things that confuses everyone and herself, what a wondrous mystery.
Augh, poor Cavan though. Ew. Well can hardly wait for more :)
Augh, poor Cavan though. Ew. Well can hardly wait for more :)
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August 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Another interesting and job well done sweetie! I can hardly wait for more, it's very interesting how you've gotten me more curious about everything (and I know I keep saying that but bleh). Also THANK YOU, for spacing it out. It was much easier to read.
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August 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Another really good chapter honey. I really liked the fight scene and I really like and dislike the fact you're building so much mystery in front of the reader.
One critique, if at all possible next time you have that long of a fight scene, put some paragraphing between it, it was a pain in my eyes and in my butt to pause and look through where I was.
But yeah, another good chapter, can't wait for more.
One critique, if at all possible next time you have that long of a fight scene, put some paragraphing between it, it was a pain in my eyes and in my butt to pause and look through where I was.
But yeah, another good chapter, can't wait for more.
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July 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter honey. Good job! I'm interested more about the story of the Maiden's travel and reasoning behind it :)
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July 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nice ending. And now you're just starting more of the interesting drama and curious nature of this entire thing. I'm very interested in what the purpose's of Seiru's plans are, and I feel really sorry for Cavan.
Overall a very interesting chapter, good job sweetie.
Overall a very interesting chapter, good job sweetie.
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July 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh snap! What could this possibly mean for our heroes!? And this was another wonderful chapter honey, a few grammar mistakes here and there, but it's all good.
But overall a very good chapter for a bit of forwarding and bringing my interest even more into it.
But overall a very good chapter for a bit of forwarding and bringing my interest even more into it.