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for Merch Guy

by Snapped212

person Snicket
schedule April 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is really good! Is there a sequel to this or is it simply a one-shot? Id really like to know :)
person Jetfire
schedule July 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Why is this a one shot?! Why is there not more?! it soooo good....there'd better be a sequel! Man I want more it sooo cool and sexy adn cute and EVERYTHING!

Huggins Aduial
schedule July 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Omg, I loved this story! I hope you're gonna continue it! I'm surprised Nathan and Jahan didn't exchange phone numbers.

This was a pleasure to read; it was so well-written, no typos, no grammatical errors, no punctuation (or lack of) errors; it was great! Excellent job!:)

I hope to read more! =)
person kylee
schedule July 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love it. Such a refreshingly different story. I am looking forward to reading more.