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Wow, what a good chapter! A bit confusing, but good! :)

Did River cause the fire at Matt's? And why does Brody have to leave? To see Darius?

Good update; looking forward to more! :)

Yeah, I don't like my chances for getting unhooked. ;) This is really interesting, I love "superhero" abilities; I'm really curious to see where this is heading now that River and Matt have powers, and that Brody's seem to be changing. I hope you're able to update really soon! :D

So this so-called "gift" is genetic. And apparantely it's not just seeing dead people. It seems when Brody is angry he can make things move. Interesting. So Sam set the whole thing up but only b/c he wanted to see how the brothers would react towards one another. Why? What's it to him? Does Sam have a "gift" also? Matt can make fire, maybe Sam can do something? And Forrest killed himself b/c he couldn't handle his "gift".

I see you added the paranormal to the type of story. That's good. I'm kinda lost, but I'm hooked, so that's good! lol

Looking forward to more! :)

Sorry, I can't read this story, which is a shame as the summary sounded interesting. It's the POV. "I'm" not doing anything, I'm reading about characters doing stuff. So why is the text saying I am? Seriously, my sincere opinion (and my opinion alone) is that this should be either in first or third person perspective, not in second.

i like the way you write! i'll be sure to bookmark this ^__^

I love how the second person point of view has made me feel like such a part of the story. Usually it's not something I enjoy reading, but you have used it to make everything that is happening feel much more real and immediate. The characters and interesting, and the more I read the deeper I get sucked in. Thank you, I am really enjoying this.

THIS IS AMAZING. I've always hated second POV but here it just works. I can't wait for more of this story, to see where you take things :)

I love this story, it's fascinating! The POV turned me off for like 2 seconds, until I realized how brilliant the writing is. I hope you're able to update soon, I'm so hooked!

Ok, so River thinks seeing dead people is a "GIFT"???? Some gift. I think I'd return it.

I guess you should add paranormal maybe to the story codes or put that in the summary and the part right before the m/m where erotica, or romance, or general goes, paranormal or maybe fantasy, Idk.....

Anyway...how does River know Brody can see dead people? Can River? Does it run in the family? Inquiring minds (ok, mine) want to know dammit! lol

Wow. I have to admit upfront, I didn't expect much out of this story and was expecting to encounter a light-hearted, easy read about the misadventures of a young man from the short synopsis. I had to add, by the way, the summary completely lets down the story because it doesn't even scratch the surface of how utterly amazing the story and characters are. I dearly wish there were more chapters...alas, there's nothing I can do but sit and wait patiently *glares at screen with arms folded*. Haha...but seriously. Update soon? Even -ish? Please?