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for Mandolin Strings

by KaydenSmith

schedule July 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what an action packed chapter! I say Robert should have pressed charges against that prick Derek. He got off (ha, pardon the pun! hehe) too easy.

I loved their first date; Sam was so sweet writing and playing a song just for Rob. I did wonder though why Rob didn't shower before he changed? Isn't that kinda weird? He's going out on his first date after being at work all day and being accosted in an elevator, probably sweating, and he doesn't take a shower? Hmmmmm. Hopefully Sam didn't notice, lol.

And Robert is lucky to have found someone like Sam who can charm the pants (or skirts) off of anyone. I'm like Robert; I hate social shit like that and Sam just took it all in stride.

Great chapter; loved how it was so long! Great job Kayden! :)
person Mya416
schedule July 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So far I really like the story. :) Keep it up!
person Anon
schedule July 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
kayden, are you Canadian? I thought you were British at first, but the way your characters talk isn't quite British nor quite American. Also, I really liked Robert and Sam's 'walk' :P
person Para
schedule July 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awwww! Sam is such a knight! Send me one pease? ^-^
I hope Robert lets him in soon! Poor Robby! He only wants a naked Sam to cuddle with! T^T

Guess I'll just have to wait to find out!
person Anon
schedule July 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Robert has a date, Robert has a date!Q :P Good for him. Sam will help him to be less stressed and miserable. Thanks for the quick update. :)
person Anon
schedule July 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Not bad for a second story. :) You have some problems with your tenses, but with practice I'm sure you'll improve. I know I did. :P Anyway, I like the basic story line and am enjoying the story. Please continue. -DL
person Liz
schedule July 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww Robert came out to Sam :D he's on his way to love and happiness. Cant wait for Victoria's Bday party, both Sam and Victoria are such awesome characters their dynamic must be epic!
schedule July 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh I am so proud of Robert for opening up to Sam. Sam seems like he really likes Robert and I know the feeling's mutual, even if Robert is trying to deny that. :)

I meant to tell you in the last chapter but I forgot until after I clicked the review button: I love the banter between Victoria and Robert. They certainly don't speak like a mother and son would normally speak. She's so open-minded about what she says. I know at first she didn't agree w/his lifestyle, but now she seems to be happy about it. Her language and choice of words show that she's more than happy to talk about her son being gay.

Anyway, I love the way they kid around and through their kidding I can tell they really love each other.

So, another awesome chapter Kayden (awesome name, btw). Can't wait for more! :)
schedule July 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hahah, as soon as I reviewed the last chapter, I noticed you already updated! lol

You know, Vikki and Robert's relationship is more like best friends than mother and son.

I can't believe that son of a bitch Max; Vikki should have fired that cunt. lol What a homophobe. And I had a question: how are you supposed to ride in the back of a quad, or a motorcycle and NOT hold on for dear life to the person driving? Seriously, don't ALL people hang on to the waist of the driver? Max is a moron.

I can't wait for their date! Sam was so cute; he got all nervous asking Robert.

Awesome chapter, thanks for the quick update! :)
person Liz
schedule July 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poor Robert! Im glad he finally opened up, keeping that inside cant be healthy. At least he's on the road to recovery thanks to his very unique mommy haha. And I'm sure Sam would love to help him get back in the swing of things ;) Love the story, keep the chapters coming :D