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September 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was great!!!! I totally love the wolves I hope they will continue to play a part in this story!!!! And the flirting between Amelia and the wolf guy (how was his name again?) well anyway it was so cute!!!! She really need some loving!!!! i can't wait for more see you soon!!!
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September 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god. Riley and Amelia are so fucking cute XD I think I just got a cavity!! I can't wait to see more of their interactions (Sorry NicolixEthan XD). I really hope they become a full out couple X3
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September 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ohh, me like Amelia and Riley, it's about time the witch got hers.
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September 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! I love this wolf family and Riley with Amelia is way too adorable! Do I detect love in the air for those two? I hope so!
More Please! :o)
More Please! :o)
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August 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I wrote you a really long review, but this site fucked it up and lost it.
To sum up, fantastic chapter. Sorry, but I don't have any more time left to rewrite the whole thing all over again and I'm seriously pissed about it.
To sum up, fantastic chapter. Sorry, but I don't have any more time left to rewrite the whole thing all over again and I'm seriously pissed about it.
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August 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Of course I remember what Riverside is since I just read all of MD yesterday and MC today ;)!!
First, I'd like to apologize for not going back and reviewing the first book and the previous chapters, but I'm really just lazy butt hole, and it takes me a lot to get inspired enough to leave a review. I'll definitely try to review all the next chapters...but no promises lol. (I have signed up for the notification.. yay me!)
Wow. That was extremely addicting. You were right about the first book having a lot of fluff, and it might've started a little slow, but it really caught on, and once the action and drama started, I was about to have heart attacks numerous times as you swayed from trying to tear my heart into pieces out of sympathy, and making it beat way faster than (I'm sure :P) what was good for me.
One of the most enjoyable parts of the story for me was the character developments. Not only were you great at presenting the characters in the current times, but the background stories that were told, at just the right intervals, were fascinatingly intense and detailed. That's why Felix's arc was one of my favorite parts of the story even though I normally abhor and skip over flashbacks. And Evan just needs to get spanked :). Honestly, I really felt bad for Dimitri as Conrad killed him, but after a night's sleep, I realized that Dimitri was still horribly twisted and deserved his fate.
I love the change in time and settings between the first book and the second book, and that Nicoli is no longer helpless. I'm definitely looking forward to more of your twisted plotting to mess up your wonderfully made characters :P.
PS. I LOLed so hard (I have no idea why) when Faith said that healthy people tasted bland... I'm gonna work on tasting bland now ;).
First, I'd like to apologize for not going back and reviewing the first book and the previous chapters, but I'm really just lazy butt hole, and it takes me a lot to get inspired enough to leave a review. I'll definitely try to review all the next chapters...but no promises lol. (I have signed up for the notification.. yay me!)
Wow. That was extremely addicting. You were right about the first book having a lot of fluff, and it might've started a little slow, but it really caught on, and once the action and drama started, I was about to have heart attacks numerous times as you swayed from trying to tear my heart into pieces out of sympathy, and making it beat way faster than (I'm sure :P) what was good for me.
One of the most enjoyable parts of the story for me was the character developments. Not only were you great at presenting the characters in the current times, but the background stories that were told, at just the right intervals, were fascinatingly intense and detailed. That's why Felix's arc was one of my favorite parts of the story even though I normally abhor and skip over flashbacks. And Evan just needs to get spanked :). Honestly, I really felt bad for Dimitri as Conrad killed him, but after a night's sleep, I realized that Dimitri was still horribly twisted and deserved his fate.
I love the change in time and settings between the first book and the second book, and that Nicoli is no longer helpless. I'm definitely looking forward to more of your twisted plotting to mess up your wonderfully made characters :P.
PS. I LOLed so hard (I have no idea why) when Faith said that healthy people tasted bland... I'm gonna work on tasting bland now ;).
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August 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Whooo damn it's been awhile since i read...im so busy with work :( Love how the stories picking up!!! And the demon pffft he's completely different than what i thought he would be :D Maaan i cant wait for some action between Nicoli and Andre!! Ohhhhh a threesome??????? >:D Hahahaha omg if Conrad started hitting on Nicoli i think i'd get a nose bleed XD Just my own fantasy too bad it prob wont happen :( hahaha no worries bout the writing together but some tips would be super awesome!! my e-mail is amxharux@aol.com :) Cant wait for more of the story to unfold!!!!
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August 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was great!!!! I really thought I was going crazy for a moment when nicoli said he didn't know cora beeing from a werewolfpack!!!! I was like *didn't she tell him already, I was sure he told him, did I miss something?* But thanks to your explanation in the end I now understand!!! And the smutt was just as great as always!!!!! thank you a lot for the update!!!! See you again soon!!!!
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August 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oooh.. I can't wait to see her family. I wonder what they're going to be like. I must admit, I was really confused reading this chapter. I was asking myself, wasn't this explained already? Heh. I can't help but feel something serious is going to happen during the visit. I can't wait to find out. Have fun writing the next chapter! :3
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August 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poor Amelia, talk about awkward. I don't know what i should pity her more for, being picked on by the vampires or walking in on Ethan and Nicoli.