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person sadistic624
schedule September 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG i am so sorry. i havent reviewed in like 3 weeks. i feel horrible. i am so so sorry. so starting from chapter 8. hmm switching scenes around on us are u? meanie i really liked that scene with nicoli and cora. oh well, we get andre in the new one so thats a bonus. hehe more nicoli and ethan lovin huh? me thinks you have a thing for them. XD! so chapter 9. hmm we get to meet cora's family. sweet werewolves!!! finally we get werewolves. gotta love them. hmm i like cora's brother he's funny in a puppy like way? i guess. do i sense sparks between him and amelia. haha i wonder what aunt hailey would think of her sweet niece being with a big bad wolf. i found it funny how riley kept wanting amelia to do a magic trick. once again you introduce us to a supernatural hottie. i think you have a think for them. alright so chapter 10. YAYAYAYYAYAY finally a great sex scene with andre! having it with ethan was a plus. i really enjoyed them together going from sweet to ruff in seconds. it rocked! cant wait till andre gets his hands on nicoli. thou it would be hilarious if nicoli found out about their conversation and denied both of them XD! hmm so we finally get to riverside and find isaak. poor conrad! but i did enjoy seeing him and gavin interact. we don't get to see a lot of that when the clan is around. cant wait to see what happens to conrad and gavin. you love leaving us cliffies dont you!? once again i am sorry of not reviewing but life gets in the way sometimes. serioulsy exited for your next chap darkness, hugs!
schedule September 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aw! So sad! Poor Conrad... And what the heck happened there? God damn cliff hangers! x3 I can't wait for the next one. Also, loved the bit between Andre and Ethan. That was a nice little addition. Which then became sad when it reached the next part between Conrad and Gavin. Oh well. Update soon! :D
person Malachi2223/Jen
schedule September 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this chapter...up until the end you sadist! >=( What the hell happened to Conrad???

I loved seeing Ethan catching again and seeing Andre for the first time was awesome. I can't wait for the 3-way with them and Nicoli to happen...it had better happen! o.0

Gavin and Conrad were stunning. I loved their interaction as they searched and then again when they found Issac. Gavin is such a steady rock for the clan, but so much more so for Conrad. Do they ever have sex or is their relationship only friendship? I would love to see Gavin comforting and consoling Conrad with his body when they get back to the hotel and then Conrad falling asleep, exhausted, in Gavin's arms. That would be so poignant and amazing.
schedule September 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was such a cute family...Cora's family is awesome! And that Riley (yummy)...Amelia is finally getting some male attention and it's great to see her be flirty and cute. Great chapter!!!
schedule September 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ethan and Andre was hot! I can only imagine how Nicoli and Andre will be...something tells me Ethan might be a little jealous if he isn't able to at least watch LOL. It was nice seeing the true friendship and almost brother like relationship with Gavin and Conrad. I don't know why but I really like Gavin A LOT! Great chapter...loved it!
person BijouDuMon
schedule September 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
AW!! Cora's family is actually really sweet! :) I don't know why, but I expected her father to be something like Conrad, you know? All serious and strict but he seems super nice, and her mother is cool too. And what was that at the end, eh? Amelia and Riley are certainly hitting it off... ;) Can't believe it's already at 9 chapters now! So excited for the next one!! ~Bijou
schedule September 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Woot! Yay number 100! I feel so special. -plays with the confetti, throwing it around- You know, I actually never understood confetti. Sure it looks nice, but what fun is it when someone has to clean it up? Lol.

I love Cora's family. I really hope this DOES turn out to be a good visit. The drama can happen later. You have no idea how hard I was laughing at her brother. He's hilarious. It's going to be really interesting seeing the wolves together. I can't wait until the next chapter. It's going to be really interesting if something develops between Amelia and Riley. I can imagine Nicoli's reaction.

Happy writings! See you next chapter!
person v
schedule September 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aww, Cora's family is cute! Even Riley, who I really didn't like since he was being kind of a dick to Nicoli during the whole visit. But since the last scene confirmed his probable crush on Amelia, I understand that he probably channeled his interest/jealousy into being a jerk to Nicoli.
person waterwolf
schedule September 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwww I liked this chapter. Amelia and Riley are so cute togeather.
person Mint
schedule September 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yaaay! New chappie is up early; Saw last night but was reading somethin' else so I just read now. This was awesome and fun n' enjoyable. Meeting her pack kind of reminded me of Twilight hehe Have you read Twilight or seen the movies? Thats one of my fave series if not best 1. I think Riley and Amelia will hook up; it certainly seems possible. Wonder if you'll make it happen? Please update asap. Should I stop tellin' you this since I know when you'll update? lol :D