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person smint45
schedule September 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was fantastic!!! I totally loved it!!! Poor Conrad!!! Although I must say I loved his breakdown!!! This stoic guy really had it coming!!! And he and garvin are so sewwt together!!!! I love them!!!! And I want to see more of the werewolfs ^^ See you soon!!!
person Mint
schedule September 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow so emotional. Poor Conrad. D: It's good he had Gavin to lean on. I WAS wondering why you did not update on Sunday, and I started even worrying that something happened. I understand though. You know, I suggest even giving up on updating every week if it's just too hard...like even once every few weeks or even once a month would b ok w/me. I Do love the weekly ones though so hopefully u can keep this schedule. Awesome chappie! Hope we get to see Nic and Ethan soon. Btw, you're great with making histories and back stories of ppl...seriously! Can't wait to see the wolves too. I also HOPE you don't Ever lose your interest since you mentioned in a reply to me it is possible. I hope you stay motivated.Update asap!
schedule September 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awwww! That was so sad... AND! There was no Andre/Ethan smex to make it better. Ah... I love Gavin. He is amazingly kind and caring. I really just want to give him a hug. It was so sweet how he held Conrad. It's going to be interesting watching them try to tell the rest of the clan. I feel even more bad for Faith. She's hurting enough, and it'll probably be even worse now. Good luck writing the new chapter!
schedule September 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I feel for Demitri but i agree with Gavin, and poor Conrad. Good thing no one else was there, they would never let him live it down.
person Fire Demon
schedule September 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!Of course it was a reminder of the tragedy of when Conrad killed his own bro for a crime he never committed;But nevertheless great chapter!xD
Ethan and Andre were very cute...I just hope Andre keep his word and be gentle with Nicy,or else...* a flash of red eyes *!
And Cony and Gavin's relationship,well,it would make Andre really jealous,all right!
Speaking of which,what HAPPENED to Conrad,for God's sake???
person question
schedule September 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Amelia doesn't even have a driver's license or know how to drive, so in the mechanical way, how would she know how to change the shelby into a junk car, to the point where she is even manipulating the car's internal parts such as the engine? It doesn't make sense to me...

Since Amelia knows little about cars I don't think she should be able to know how to turn one car into another without the result failing or the engine exploding.
person question2
schedule September 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
How can skeletons slump against a wall? By the time a body is a skeleton wouldn't the bones have piled up instead in a mess?
If a dead body had some hardened but deteriorated muscles and tendons on it then it would be able to support some sort of bodily structure, but if it's just bones there should be no recognizable body structure, just a pile of bones.
person waterwolf
schedule September 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yay anothet chapter! I loved seeing this side of Conrad and espicaly Gavin. Who wouldn't love to see Ethan and Andre getting it on. *melts* O.O who know Faith had that in her, can't blame her though. OMG is that a three way hint I saw *double checks to make sure eyes were not playing tricks* Close enough,YESSSSSSSS. I'm not usualy the demanding sort but you have to do it now, I'd be like kicking a puppy if you don't. *gives best puppy dog look*
person Mint
schedule September 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
YAY! I woke up early today, and saw you online and actually waited to see this thing up. Awesome chappie again! I so totally forgot that this chappie wouldn't have amelia and the wolves. I also thought it would have bad guys...guess I read it wrong b4 when you explained who is in this chappie. It was fun seeing the smex between Andre and Ethan! I predict Nicoli will get in on the action with them! I hope in the end, you'll make Ethan and Nic together...only maybe? Like maybe... Andre and Owen can get together so Andre can leave Ethan and Nic alone...I think it's possible. I hope we see Owen sometime...I liked his char. Or even better... Owen and Andre. Please let them together! Also maybe Isaak's (spelling wrong? lol)ghost appeared at the end. Update asap!
person smint45
schedule September 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow that chappie was amazing!!!! I totally liked the eathan andre smutt!!!! That was just great!!!! I alos knew riverdale was the town where Isacc lies!!! I really wonder what happens to conrad!!!! Will he see what happend that time when isacc died? I can' twait for more see you soon!!!!