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omg its beeennn so loooooooong so sorry i havent reviewed in a while busy busy busy nothing but work...:/ ugh but anyway i love how this story is going and that shower scene? HOT!!!!!!! Damn i cant wait for the moment when Andre pounces :D YUM!!!!!!!!! And omg Conrad i cried damn i love that man!!! So many good things are going on with this story woop woop!! Thanks for writing cant wait for more!!!

I wish I could think of something better to say besides 'this story is awesome' but that pretty much sums it up. lol. i love the personalities you give your characters, in so many stories all the characters have the same personalities. All your characters really seem like real people, I love it. Cant wait to read more!!

I enjoyed this chapter! It was great to see this family atmosphere again! I can't wait to see The Changing! Nicoli is ever the hero to me and I love it he will protect those he love until the end! Can't wait for the next chapter! Great update!

First, towards the end - “You’re as a part of this pack as everyone else and Mr. Jenk’s can go screw himself. Now let’s go get moms salami, shall we?” I think what you meant to say was “You’re as MUCH a part of this pack as everyone else and Mr. Jenk’s can go screw himself. Now let’s go get moms salami, shall we?”

Now, that aside, the whole scene with Amelia and Nicoli and Cora and Delilah really just pissed me off. I didn't find it funny or heartwarming or whatever. Maybe it's just because I HATE it when I'm forced by someone to wake up against my will, but Amelia forcing Nicoli and then hurting him to make him do what she wanted really made me angry and Cora's mom hurting her daughter by opening the curtains bordered too much on the side of abusive for me no matter how much she smiled or laughed while she was doing it. I can't stand people who abuse others that they know won't really fight back or stand up for themselves.

That old man was terrible too. What a closed minded racist...or speciesist if you will. Whether Cora chose the vamp way or the wolf way she's still Cora. That's like loving your kid for 18 years and then hating him just cause he says he's gay. I just don't understand that shit at all. Isn't he still the same kid you loved 5 minutes before he said something you didn't want to hear? Same thing with Cora.

It was an amazing chapter to get me riled up like this. I can't wait for the next one! Good job missy! LOL!

Awsome chapter! hummmm if Nicoli doese attack Mr. Jerk *cough cough* sorry I mean Mr. Jenk I hope he uses something better then a pipe this time. The last chapter was also wonderful and very emotinal. Sorry I didn't get a chance to review, real life unfortinatly demanded too much time.

Wooooooot man! I'm glad that you finally completed the chappie! I'm fine with any schedule you pick for updating; as long as it's not 1x a yr This chappit was fun; all that food made me hungry ;p I can't wait to see the Changing! I wonder if we'll get 2 c Mr. Jenk there...probly. I also wonder what the rest of the clan is up to while we're getting to read about Nic 'n Amelia. I enjoy the wolf world you created!!! Also, I'm surprised you didn't read a lot before! Ne ways, please update asap!

Can't wait to see how they transform. Is it smooth and simple or painful and gorey? I like to think it will go ok but i also think something might go wrong. Hopefully Riley won't hump Amelia's leg.

Oh that was amazing!!! i totally love the weres ^^ and the alpha is intimidating but still such a nice guy!!!! I really love him already!!!! And Mr. Jenk is just an old prejudiced sadistic guy, I really see bad things coming with him at the changing!!!! I can't wait for the next part!!! See you ^^

Wow, that was intense. I didn't really agree with everything that Gavin said. I really felt that Dimitri thought he was doing what was best for Conrad to survive. He might have been misguided and it all might have gotten away from him in the end, but he really had Conrad's best interest at heart.

Gavin is a rockstar! I love him!!! I had to state that before anything else. I kind of understand why Dimitri lied when it first happened, but at some point he could have easily told the truth and stopped all the killings. If he truly wanted to protect Conrad why do a "death bed confession" and not tell the rest of his clan to stop the war? Maybe he did...after all we don't know exactly what happened after he was carried away before "dying"...(that is if he really died...we haven't really been told of the body...yet so I've learned from reading your work to not make rash judgements too soon)...LOL. This was a great chapter. (I still don't care for Dimitri and the evil ones...lol) but I guess I kind of understand his thinking but like Gavin said it is no excuse. I wonder how much has Dimitri told his own clan and I also wonder how Meiner will take this. He is already a little cray-cray (ok a lot cray-cray)!