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person smint45
schedule November 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god this chappy was so fantastic!!!!! I'm so glad riely came in time!!! Otherwise Amelia and core would probably both be dead and Nicoli tortured!!! I really loved how protective riely was!!! That was absoloutly fantastic!!!! And Then the pack appearing in the last instant!!! Just great timing!!!! Thanks a lot for posting this chappy while beeing on hiatus!!!! I really hope that you will update the next chappy sonn and will not keep us hanging another year!!!! See you!!! Yours faithfully smint45
person waterwolf
schedule November 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Had to blink and pinch myself to make sure I was seeing things right. Loved the new chapter as always. I hope you can continue, I've missed your updates and you've worked so hard on this. ::Hugs::
person Xunlyn
schedule November 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hey, thanks for updating! Although I've never commented before, I've been following you for a while. I was literally just wondering about this story, so I was very surprised to see the email pop up! Anyway I wish you the best and hope to be able to hear more from you soon! (was literally on the edge of my seat, biting nails in anticipation of this chapter, lol).
person smint45
schedule October 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yay Darkness you are back!!!! I'm sorry to say that I can't really remeber the last chappies since it's been so long... So I will need to reread this story to get back on the train^^ It probably will take a wile since university is killing me at the moment so please be patient. I will give you a review for this chappie when I'm done^^ I will thank you for posting this chappie in advance^^
schedule October 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I missed this stoey so much! Don't you ever do that again! But seriously hurry up and update!
person xXkissofdeath89Xx
schedule October 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well, damn. My prediction about Seth making off with Nicoli again was wrong. Wtf? I'm never wrong. Dx Lol. Oh weeell. Eeeeeee! DARKY! *huggles* You're not dead! (I knew that already, of course, because we've been exchanging messages on LJ, but whatev) I'm sorry you had such a hard time with this chapter. :C Hopefully the next one will be easier, whenever you get to it. Like I said before, just take your time. The inspiration will come back to you when you least expect it, and we'll be waiting for you. :) EPIC BATTLE TIME! -does some kind of epic battle pose- ...Seth kind of got his ass handed to him this time. It's. About. Fucking. Time. xD Lol. Sorry, I know even the maniacal Seth is one of your babies, but he creeps me the hell out. Amelia was pretty kick-ass! And I bet Nicoli got some stress relief beating the crap out of Seth's face. Riley to the rescue!! I had a feeling he would show up because Riley's awesome. Amazing, action-packed chapter, as usual! It seemed a little short, but I probably just zoomed through it too fast, because OMG UPDATE~! And also as usual, I look forward to the next chapter. :) Love ya, Darky!
schedule August 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love to read more!!!
Great story and plot, and well-developed characters.
Still wondering about Nicy's eye, and introducing a devil is very interesting(possibly the one his nightmares are waiting for).
person Wycziri
schedule July 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I miss this story :(
person PaxNodoz
schedule April 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Just popping in to ask where you've disappeared to, since it's been a LONG time since you last updated :( you okay? I hope it's not the end for Nicoli and his world...
schedule January 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Haven't heard from you in a while. Hope everything is ok. Missing your writing. Hope to hear from you soon rather it's a note to your readers or an update. Take care! -Violetstorm