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schedule July 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh you evil person! Now i want you to update super fast so i can find out what happens next!
person CMJ101087
schedule July 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! What the hell?! He's possessed isn't he???? The evil psycho spirit of the dead vampire woman is in him. Or a ticked off dead witch or something. Poor Ethan, poor Nicoli. Say they'll be okay!
person xXkissofdeath89Xx
schedule July 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Omg, what? What?! What is this?? Was Nicoli about to stab Ethan in the back (literally!)?! Wtf, mate! I was all excited about the new story being up, but then you come out with this. And now I'm not so sure if I'm actually happy about it being out... T____T But I must read more!! I will be waiting eagerly for the first chapter to come out! And as always, the introduction was great! *huggles*
person xXkissofdeath89Xx
schedule July 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I read that a bit wrong. xD I was trying to speedread, because it's pretty late, and I'm tired and need to get to bed, but I couldn't sleep knowing there was an update. Haha! The knife was behind Nic's back; I thought Nicoli was holding it behind Ethan. But still! He's holding a knife, hidden and quite threateningly! I noticed something was off about little Nickel from the beginning... As soon as Ethan told him he wanted to talk to him. He just seemed really short-tempered, and I kept thinking, 'that isn't Nicoli, that isn't Nicoli.' And I guess I was right. Well, I'm going to bed now. xD I'm still looking forward to the next chapter! And I kind of hope you'll keep some semblance of an update schedule again. I really liked knowing when a chapter is coming out. I actually had a schedule for a while of updates I was expecting online. Wednesdays, there was always a new page of the Teahouse comic. Thursdays, there was usually a new chapter of MD, Friday was a new episode of Sekaiichi Hatsukoi (though, that's now over, until they come out with season 2), and Saturday, there's always a new episode of Tiger & Bunny! I love T&B... :D Nighty night, Darky! Muah!
schedule July 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!

I'm sooooo excited.

And I can't wait to get to the part of the story with the prologue in it. I know it won't be in the beginning of the story, but it sounds so interesting so far.




So many illegible captchas to post this review lol.

And you posted when I was doing my homework again lady. HOW DO YOU DO IIIIIIIIT?
person Thatredhead
schedule July 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey, it's me. ThatRedHead. Logging in on an i-touch is a pain, so I didn't. My computer died again. Battery is gone.... -sigh- I was almost ready to update too. Meh... Crazy start to the part two. Love it. I'm dying to know what's gonna happen next. Loving it. I wanna know what's gonna happen with he eyeeeeeee..... Then again, I've always kinda spazzed about that. Awesome start. I can't wait for chapter one. See you soon!
person nanase08
schedule July 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaH! *hysterically circles the entire room* that's why i hate reading prologue. >A< i'll always think about the possible next events, it will never fly away in my mind. Oh dear what is nicoli thinking?! i kept thinking a lot of answers but still couldn't come up with any reasonable ones. The suspense is killing me * tugging my hair*
schedule July 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*brainplosion*
person smint45
schedule July 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awe that was really crul of you!!!! But great non the less!!! I think Nicolis behavoir has something to do with the eye thing and the demon, but i'm not sure!!! I think I already love this!!!! I can't wait for chappie one!!!!
person Malachi2223
schedule July 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You suck! :P Not really, just kidding, but I hate being left hanging like this, so...you suck! :o)

I hope you're gonna post a chapter a week for this story, it would be nice to have a steady flow of Moonlight goodness! LOL!