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July 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! What a first chapter!
Moooore soon, please!!!!!!
Moooore soon, please!!!!!!
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July 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was just amazing!!!! I totally love the demon guy^^ And Meier is really geting more dangerous by the second!!! I really hope the clan will be able to keep the upper hand!!! I so can't wait for chappie two!!! See you again!!!
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July 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow...what a bangin beginning! I liked Katsu, Edith got on my nerves and Jayden was just flat out creepy! :o)
I'm glad we're finally getting a look at Nicoli's tormentor. He's...he's...UGLY! ;o)
Good job! Keep it up my dear! *hugs* ^^
I'm glad we're finally getting a look at Nicoli's tormentor. He's...he's...UGLY! ;o)
Good job! Keep it up my dear! *hugs* ^^
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July 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Question: If this demon is so powerful, why can't he get Nicoli by himself?
What's keeping him from grabbing Nicoli off the streets while he is in his human form, or getting the help of a priest himself?
Why does he need a vampire like Meier to help him?
He could've asked any other vampire to help him and promise them something less, rather than helping Meier and wasting time chasing after hearts...
Unless this demon really isn't that smart? XD
It sort of feels like things are going way too good for Meier. It doesn't really feel natural that all these good things are going for him (getting the help of two old vampires, successfully crippling that other guys' clan, getting the demon's help; all within the same hour). I just don't believe it.
But otherwise, the chapter is still entertaining. So good job
What's keeping him from grabbing Nicoli off the streets while he is in his human form, or getting the help of a priest himself?
Why does he need a vampire like Meier to help him?
He could've asked any other vampire to help him and promise them something less, rather than helping Meier and wasting time chasing after hearts...
Unless this demon really isn't that smart? XD
It sort of feels like things are going way too good for Meier. It doesn't really feel natural that all these good things are going for him (getting the help of two old vampires, successfully crippling that other guys' clan, getting the demon's help; all within the same hour). I just don't believe it.
But otherwise, the chapter is still entertaining. So good job
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July 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG HE'S HERE!!!! YES!!!!!!! YES!!!!! YES!!! *Bounces for joy* Im sooo excited! I did kinda picture him to be different haha like reeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaalllllllly hot/scary pffft im weird ya but dammmmn i cant wait for him to meet Nicoli omg just thinking about it!!! im one of the obsessed peeps... i like how your bringing in new people ah!!! im just soooo excited!!!! So....please update...asap! hahahahhaha i feel so entranced with this story!! thank you thank you!!!!
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July 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG! You're evil ;) I did not se that plot developing :) Gosh, now a want to read it all right now! You do understand that everyone will hound you for more chapters after this one? Pleeease post more soon!
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July 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
HOLY SHIT HOLY SHIT HOLY SHIIIIIIT!!!!!!! ITS A DEMON!!!!!!!!! GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH UPDATEUPDATE IN THE NAME OF GOD I COMMAND YOU DEMON!!!! @W@
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July 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
okay... that'ss kinda worrying. *looks at you with hauntd eyes.
no betrayal, none. I hate betrayal.... *puts hands over ears and eyes.
no betrayal, none. I hate betrayal.... *puts hands over ears and eyes.
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July 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aaaahh! Come on!! We need more!! :D Please post as soon as possible, I can't wait!
Hugs
Hugs
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July 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I don't think I ever reviewed book one, but I enjoyed it immensely. Although, I will admit that when you introduced the eye thing and related things about Nicoli, I was pretty excited for it to play a role. While I was a bit disappointed that it didn't factor much into book one, I am excited about how it'll play out in this one. Since it seems like it's gonna play a major role. :3 Looking forward to more!