rate_review Reviews

IT has been forever since I reviewed, but Darkness but I've been here all along. I have to say this chapter is just as exciting and thrilling as the first one in Moonlight Denial. I am so excited to read more and cannot wait too.

You know if you keep writting awesome chapters and leave me cliffhangers like that i am going to have to lock you in a small room with just your computer so I can get chapters faster!!

Cyber kisses and cookies for anyone who can draw the new guy! Oh what dose he want with our young hero!

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!!!!! THAT WAS THE DEMON THINGY!! AHHH!!! Omg... My best friend was laughing at me as I was reading this.. I starting squealing when the demon thingy came in. That was nuts. I can't WAIT for the next chapter.

Ok, I know I havent reviewed in awhile and Im soooo sorry, Ive had a zillion things going on (trying to get ready to have a baby). Honestly, I cant really thing of what to say, Im still in shock that MD is over. While I was reading, I kept thinking of a million things to say in the review, now I cant think of anything. lol. I loved the way MD ended, with Dimitri's 'confession' of what happened to Issac, and then Meier leading the clan now, and Nicoli almost getting himself killed.

The preview and the prolouge for MC was just mean! I wanna know why Nicolis going all weird. Im guessing the way he acted with Ethan in the prolouge has something to do with his eye, right? You cant let him hurt Ethan though! Not badly at least...

So Meiers got new vampy friends now. I really like Edith and Katsu, their personalities really came out strong, its really easy to picture them in my head... Itll be intresting to see how that progresses.. And so we finally meet the shadow man demon dude! Ohh, I cant wait to see how that works out, making deals with demons never works, so itll be fun to see if Meier has bad juju from it. Cant wait to read more!

Prologue,what a great starter for the story to begin. Then click to page 2 and wham
bad guys. Astrasl projection from the demon to Nic,quite the inventive plot.
Thought it was a discription of hellboy there for a moment but the tails do not
match. Meirer,eh new clan leader will be the bane of his clan if he just seeks revenge desguise as a ruse to
search for the hearts.
Thanks,really breaks up my chaotic life. Please continue to share your imagenation.

Oooooo baddies starting everything off.

And you know what? A demon totally caught me by surprise there. I was expecting another vampire or something for scary dream guy lol.

And I don't think that Meier is stable enough to take care of that clan. Honestly. He's going to lead them to ruin just because he wants to hurt Ethan.

Though that may just be my opinion.

You didn't post while I was doing homework this time! But I was drunk, so I didn't read the chapter until today. I doubt I would have remembered much if I had.

And the next time you update I'll probably be at my parents' house, so I won't be able to read that one right away either. D:

wow that was unexpected... XDDDD but why i priest? i guess i have to wait for the next update to know, obviously. Anyway keep up the good work. A talented writer like you can make the readers excited and a fan like me go crazy so keep it up and make me hysterical.

well crappidy. things r looking pretty damn grim for the good guys.
Betrayal among bad guys is kinda meh. What i hate is when a a central character goes awol, especially the main character.

YAY! I was happy that you updated and within a WEEK exactly. Hopefully, this means you'll keep to the weekly schedule. Anyway, awesome first chapp ! I was disappointed we didn't hear from Nicoli and Ethan's clan though. I wanna know what they've been up to and how long time's passed. Not sure what else to say here. The other bad guys are great. I kinda agree that bad guys should get fleshed out more. SHocked to find the dream dude this early! I wonder what Cresil wants with Nicoli. Please update asap.

YES YES YES YES YES YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WOHOO GO DARKNESS ITS YOUR BIRTHDAY WERE GONNA PARTY LIKE ITS YOUR BIRTHDAY! GO CRESIL I LOVE U!!! k sorry had to get it out. but omg im so frickin happy! yes its still sad Dimitri's gone but Cresil is here so lets get the party started! by the way i love his name and by the description you gave he sounds like such a bad guy hotte already. Wow to think the guy i've been obsessed with for over half the story is finally here is kinda surreal. ya it was kinda obvious he was a demon but thats okay it just got us more exited to see him. gotta say you've really kicked started moonlight conviction. also i half to say meier is starting to grow on me. you really gave us a chance to see him differently in this chapter. yay Seth is still there too. jeez Seth obeying Meier is kinda diffent(cough kinky cough) i wonder if Seth will get down with Meier to now that he's leader. by the way sorry for not reviewing the first chapter life got in the way and then i totally forgot but gotta say great opening for moonlight conviction. back to the chapter thou. haha i loved how Seth said he didn't like the fact Cresil was after the same human as him. gotta love Seth and his psychotic tendencies. perhaps some friendly (not) competition between demon and vampire? OMG i was laughing so hard at the end of this chapter when you had the demon saying they needed a priest, the irony was great. by the way, back in the preview when nicoli's eye started to bleed did that signify Cresil entering their plane? just something i was thinking about. by the way sorry for leavin ya such a huge review for last chapter of moonlight denial. i had gone back and looked it over i didnt realize it way so long. but i cant wait for the next chapter, hope to hear from you soon.
p.s. Cresil is my new favorite character and horns and tails rock!