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Well, that was an action packed chapter! And yet another female shows up to annoy me! *sigh*

I wonder how long it will take for Nicoli or Amelia to remember Van's words when they went over the edge and wonder at them? Will either of them even notice? It was kind of a give away that Van yelled that they needed 'him'.

I don't particularly care what you call me! LOL! ;o)

Yay! Another great chapter! I think you do great with the action scenes which is nice! Once again, great writing, plot, chars, etc... yada! LOL can't wait to read next chap.

Thank yous =) Baby is due to be here September 4th. Which isn't really that far away, espcially when I think about the fact that I have NOTHING done. grrrr.

Ok, so the bleeding eye thing freaks me out, it really does. Im supposing that is has something to do with Cresil being nearby? And when are we going to find out what happened between them anyway, Im dying to know?!

I lovvvee the fact that Nicoli is learning to fight now, especially with the jokes he and Amelia make through it all. And now Amelias using her magic more and more too =) Still, good thing Ethan and Felix showed up when they did.

Now, I dont usually root on the bad guys, but Ive got to say I like Van a lot more in this. Now that hes not Dimitris baby, he can learn to be a fearsome little dude =) I like Malcom and Roni too, especially Malcom since he seems kinda like the bad guy version of Gavin. lol
Anyways, cant wait to read more! Good job on this, as usual

yay chapter 2!!!! 2 down 80 to go! jk jk. wow you put the preview in early this time. last time it was like ch 6 or something before the preview went it. no prob thou that's better for us anyway XD! yes i am ecstatic about cresil finally being the story. ive only waited a story and a chapter for him to appear. jk. yay go badasss nicoli show van what ya got! its nice seeing nicoli kicking some ass for once instead of being on the receiving end of it. oooh and we got to see kickass amelia to! double bonus!! question who trained nicloli to fight? i died if you said ethan or andre. i have a feeling they'd just want to train him in the art of lovemaking and not fighting XD! ...I HATE RONI...end of discussion. its horrible for her to be compared to Seth. Seth is just... and she is just so annoying. its like she's copying Seth! its not fair to seth! i wish seth would just eat her and get it over with. hmmm malcolm is an interesting character, kinda similar to gavin but he gives off a different vibe. i hope we get to see more of him in the future. cant wait for the next chapter and Cresil(hint hint wink wink) Lots of Love, sadistic

Oh that was amazing!!!! I already love this story^^ Well was to be expected!!! I really like that Nicoli can finally hold his man!!!! Was really necessary!!! I hated it that he alway needed to be protected although he has such an important role in the whole thing!!!! Now I wan to know what this imformant is all about!!!! I can't wait for more!!!! See you soon!!!!

The link for the reviews dosent work :/ haha nice i like how Nicoli is more involved in the fighting :D cant wait for more!!

Just a spelling thing i found:

"Okay, fond over yourself later"
fond = fawn

Awesome! Nicoli and Amelia are turning bad ass!

Just caught up on the last 2 chapters and they were quite a punch! This sequel is shaping up very well and already started off with a bang! Great couple of updates!!!

Sweet just sweeet love it!!! Hmmm i thought he would be like suuuper hot long black hair red eyes a demon of course but idk hahaha i guess >///> i have a thing for hot bad guys pffft so glad its fixed i cant wait for more! and when Nicoli sees him omfg im so excited for that!!!