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person Jen Vieira Pinto aka Malachi2223
schedule August 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I think you're balancing the recaps just fine! No worries! ^^

Hot chapter there, wonder when the menage with Andre will take place? O.o I'd love to see that! Maybe Ethan off to the side just watching at first and then finally joining in cause he just got too hot from their show! LOL!
person Mint
schedule July 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What a great chappie! Mr. Vander's sweating WAS icky lol. When he wiped hankerchief on the glasses, I was grossed out like Nic!!! LOL The suits were s smart idea. So Nic parents think they're currently on vacation right??? Do they think the two (nic + amelia) will attend college? And I wonder what happens when their "vacation" time is over? Since they can't be on "vacation" forever, I wonder when will Nic have to come home and stuff? Won't they have to since his parents will be expecting them home? Well, Nic's parents anyway. Yeah, I was confused bout this situation with his parents since they don't know what he's really doing. Yay for hot gay sex. Anyway, update asap! Have you decided what day you'll be updating every week?
person Mint
schedule July 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Side note - you spelled "Normal" wrong in the chapter title.
person smint45
schedule July 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really loved this chappie!!!! It was great!!! So now we know where to search for the next heart!!!! And the little smutt was great!!!! Thanks a lot and see you!!!!
person sadistic624
schedule July 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Conrads a pimp!..... Just kidding, but that was a funny moment, gotta love nicoli's commentary. this was a nice chapter. not as exiting as the one before but it defiantly helped move the plot along. hmm 1 year for nicoli knowing the vamps 3 years for us hahaha. jk i swear im not being mean. i love how nicoli and amelia share a hotel room like its nothing, i wonder what aunt haley would think of that? hmm interesting concept with the suits. makes sense now why nicoli or amelia weren't hurt that badly fighting vamps. haha gotta love amelia and andre's bantering and conrad reigning them in. yaaa i really don't think roni will grow on me. but i am looking forward to seeing more of the vampires meier has allied with. CRESIL were art thou? kidding but i am exited to get see more of him. you gave us a little teaser of what he's like, but im still looking forward to delving deeper into his personality and past. speaking of teasing....WHAT THE HELL IS UP WITH CONSTANTLY TEASING US WITH ANDRE AND NICOLI? you keep hinting at them getting together and yet you haven't done it! sniff sniff ... and..sniff...you only teased...sniff sniff....us with demetri and seth...sniff...we didn't even get a good lovemaking scene...sniff..sniff....im going to go cry in the corner now....(sadistic proceeds to go cry in a corner while quietly mumbling demetri's name)
person waterwolf
schedule July 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm in love all over again.
schedule July 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aweeesooome another chapter haha :D i cant wait to see whats in store...and yummy smex XD So would Nicoli and Andre ever get it on? Ha when you mentioned he threatens him with it i got this hot pic....also it made me think of all of the guys with him pfffft im such a perv hahahaha :D Cant wait for more!!
person Ovelkara
schedule July 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
love it as always love the Nicoli x Ethan loving as well cant wait to see Nicoli meet the demon its going to be so fun to read i can feel it! XD keep it up Darkness ^_^
schedule July 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It's not much but I drew you a sketch of Ethan on deviantart I hope you like it :) (I posted it on your deviantart comments)
schedule July 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo! Nicoli learns to fight back! You have no idea how happy that makes me.

And the whole time I had just thought scary dream guy was a really powerful vampire for some reason lol.

Can't wait for another chapter honey!