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Instant love for Lael! He just seems so sweet and tortured and urghhh don't kill him, please.

Im sooo sorry I keep foregetting to review! Still trying to get the babys room ready, Ive only got three weeks left before Im due and the rooms not even painted. But I have been making sure to keep up with this story and I still lovies it.
I have to say that I really love Cresil, he just seems so badass and cool to me. And Evans clan is working with a priest, I cant wait to see how that turns out, I cant imagine it going well for the poor dude. But, I suppose when you go against what you believe out of fear, then you kinda get what you deserve.
OK, Holy crap! I did not see Lael coming. A vampire priest?! Thats got to seriously suck for the guy... Is he going to tell Conrad about Evans priest? The end kinda makes me wonder if hes going to be like Omen was, trying to 'save' Nicoli from the vampires... Oh, and whyd his eye thing go away? So many questions, so little anwsers. As always cant wait to read more =)

When i read the scene between Nicoli and Amelia i was thinking of that song driving along in my automobile. I liked the chapter, i wonder if the new vampire priest will be able to help them fight the demon.

Wow great job once again! Lael seems very nice. I like him as long as he stays on their side. And thanks for tellin me how you managaed to copyright MD. It seems like a lot of work! Please update asap!

That was a fun chapter, still too short, but much more fun. I really liked Lael too! I loved that you gave him long hair and made him pretty! Those are my favorite kinds of guys!

I think I like Lael too...he seems kind of sad though but I'm sure his story will come out in it's own time. Oh this chapter reminded me of the weird food habits Amelia has it was fun! I don't think this chapter will be to nice to Nicoli, it's like everyone is focused on him and not in a good way...first the demon and now Lael has a bad feeling...Can't wait to see how this places out!

Okay! Class is over, and I've finally got some free time again! (Right before another crazy weekend... -sigh-) So, I'm going to take this opportunity and review chapters three and four!
Chapter 3: First off... I CANNOT believe Amelia let Andre get away with calling her Snookie-Wookie... XDD (And, I also didn't realize that Andre was one of the shorter men... I'm guessing the only one shorter than him is Nicoli, right?) I liked how this chapter kind of reintroduced the clan. It was a good idea, and sometimes you actually learn something new about a character you thought you knew everything about. :) Mr. Vander's family story was rather interesting. His father sounds a tad power hungry... Or like he feels jipped out of being a Guardian, of being someone of importance. I wonder if the third Guardian will also be from a family line of Guardians? xD I love Gavin. He's so intimidating without even really trying. Haha. I wish I could get a one-way ticket to anywhere I wished and a bunch of money, too!
Those padded suits are bitchin', seriously. If only they had them here, playing tackle football with my guy friends wouldn't be so painful. xDD Lol. Amelia singed Nicoli's eyebrows... -cackles- But I'm glad she's gotten better. They're going to need that healing ability, I'm sure. Oh, Nicoli... Unfortunately, that's not the reason why they're after you. Poor boy. He doesn't have a clue.
-girly squee- Ethan/Nicoli in the third chapter?! I think I'm in heaven! -sparkles all around- Lol. It is so totally not just sex. Well, maybe it is now, but it'll become so much more. Just you wait! And did I ever mention that I just LOVE their witty bedroom banter? This was an awesome chapter. The title is very fitting. And I think your sequel writing skills are fantastic, Darky. You're doing fine. :)
Chapter 4: Another bad guys chapter! Are you alternating..? That would be an interesting idea. I am glad to have some bad guy insider, though. At least we won't be taken by surprise when they spring something especially nefarious. (I love that word... I don't get to use it nearly enough. xD) And I think this fits that definition. How... horrible. Slaughtering men of the cloth in their own church... But I totally get it now!! Why they need a priest! And Nicoli's double aura! Everything's falling into place!! (I was reading the other reviews for this chapter, and I'm surprised no one else has figured it out!) And I'm so excited, my brain's overheating! I'm just soooo happy to finally know what the hell is up with Nicoli! I think this book is going to be my favorite, simply because all of the questions brought up in the first book are being answered! -is practically vibrating with excitement- I can't WAIT for the next chapter! I'm really kind of hoping for another showdown already, even though I'm pretty sure it won't happen. The clan is probably going to go check out Mr. Vander's grandfather's cabin. -pout- I guess I'll allow this, if it's for the progression of the story. But I want to see Cresil approach Nicoli soon! Like, REALLY soon! -gasp!- I think I just realized why Nicoli starts acting funny... OMFG! My imagination is running amuck! I don't know how much longer I can take it! T___T Cresil's scary... Poor Father Falton. He has no idea what he just got himself into.
Regarding your author note at the end of the chapter, as your loyal fan (and LJ stalker, haha!), I will respect your decision to shorten your chapters. (-cries silently-) xD I'm just messing with you. I'm not all that upset. I mean, I am a little, but like I said, I'll respect your decision. As a fellow writer, I know how tough it can be to meet your 'quota'. You start writing, and it just gets out of hand. And it's either really, really bad filler, or it just turns into a monster. But I will say this, I honestly don't think MD was bloated with filler. There was some, but I thought it flowed very nicely, and I just loved the painstaking detail included in all of your chapters. I hope that, even if you do downsize your chapters, you don't leave out your glorious attention to detail. It's one of my favorite things about your stories. :) Also, about the dark and not-so-nice path you'll be leading us down in this book, I say BRING IT ON!! (I totally have a .gif for this, I'll see if I can post it on LJ for you.) XD Anyway, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. I know, I say this all the freakin' time, but it's always true. Haha. So, see you in a couple days. Sunday is going to be crazy for me, since I'm babysitting two of my nephews for... about ten hours. @.@ Shoot me now... One's six, the other is three, soon to be four. On the upside, the six-year old is likely to let me borrow his DS for the day, so I can hopefully finish playing 999. But on the downside... they're both such brats!! And I don't think my sister has internet at her place... -sigh- I guess I'll have to read it on my phone again. Well, I'm done. Kissy, over and out! -more squeezy death huggles-

Its just a SHORT review.

Bad Guys plot A+.

That was pretty awesome. Thanks by the way. I just hope I either get mine fixed or get a new one by the time the new college semester starts. The itouch is fine and dandy for keeping up with my stories, but I definitely don't think I could write any sort of essay on one. xD Ah well. Looking forward to seeing the good guys again next time. Have fun writing it.

I bet the father if going to regret his decision big time, i feel bad for the other priests.