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by conbrio

schedule July 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow, this story is very unique! and i am looking forward to see more!
schedule July 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hello! This was my first time reading one of your stories and I found it quite good. I like the POV you used and how you worded everything. I'm glad you are writing this with the boy as the initiator, as that is my favorite kind of teacher/student story. I'm looking forward to reading more and hopefully finding out how this relationship started.

Also, I liked this one enough that I visited your profile and read your other two works. I really connected with Blinded, although I wish it was much longer than it currently is. Writing more about his experiences before Charlie, during Charlie, and then after Charlie would have made it more dramatic and touching in my opinion. But I am still looking forward to reading the next segment of it. Hope to read more of your work soon!
schedule July 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Those little sluts! lol Loving the story so far! This chapter was so well-written and humorous! Great job!

Looking forward to the next chapter! :)