rate_review Reviews

I love it! I am starting to see some character development and it is going great with the sex scenes.

i love this story! though i am freaking out about what might happen to marshall. i love how you have made it so we gradually learn more about marshall's circumstances and character. he is quite endearing though at first i didn't really like him until his character was unveiled more. i don't know what to think about the teacher... i am so scared that he is going to hurt marshall eventually and reveal himself to be a frightening sadist or something... this story was incredibly sexy as well... you have really written a strong and interesting character in marshall
thank you for sharing! i am at once freaking out about and looking forward to more

Found this story today. I'm hooked. I love the premise of a teenage boy who seduces his teacher. Your writing is very, very good.

Aww man, this chapter was such a tease! I still love it, though.

Loved this chapter. I was really looking foward to reading about how their relationship came to be, and this did not let me down. Can't wait to read more!

Oh Ho! So Marshall was the one who initiated the whole having sex thing....makes me feel a little bad for Mr. Fischer....then I remember he pays a 15 year old to have sex....yeah...I very much enjoy the story!

Omg, this chapter was so funny. What a little devil Marshall is! Man, how is a teacher supposed to resist that? lol

Can't wait for more!:)

Ohhh, using manipulation to have sex with a child, Mr. Fischer is a tricky one...but how does he afford the price? I mean a teacher's salary isn't that great, plus he has a family to take care of. ...Maybe he sells drugs or some shit. That would be an awesome twist. I'm interested in what else he can do before the kid puts his foot down. I mean he does have an ace with the whole, "I'll tell on you" thing. Then again, maybe he will enjoy the kinky things, get lots of extra cash, and then go off his seperate ways. So many possibilities! I look forward to what you do with this story!

Love the pedo remark! lol

Marshall's lucky all Liam did was j/o on him; it could have been a lot worse.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter!:)

I didn't remember from the first chapter that Marshall was being paid. I thought Fisher was bad in the first chapter, but not as bad as I do now. He actually brought CHEMICALS with him so Marshall wouldn't freak out? He's a prick this guy. I can't believe Liam is into all this wrongness, for lack of a better word. It's so wrong. Yeah, Marshall BETTER get all A's for this! lol

I'm looking forward to the next chapter tho!:)