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for Quarter Mile

by bajmoore

schedule July 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Seems one of my previous questions was answered. He does work. Kitty's put an interesting spin on things though Jude seems generally insecure.
person jaskolka
schedule July 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yesss... it's getting better and better. I love Jude's character - he is a little tsundere... and it makes him so cute that I just want to hug him and make everything better.
person Anon
schedule July 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It is gooooooooooooooood:)
schedule July 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh poor Jude! He has it so bad! And Perry being so touchy feely just makes it worse. And of course, wtf is going on w/Kitty? Isn't she his manager or agent? Why would you want to spend your day off w/your manager or agent?

I think Jude should have called in sick and spent the day with Perry. They'll be other jobs, right? lol
schedule July 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm a fan, so far! Good, clear writing; a likeably grumpy protagonist; and a relatively unique love situation (you don't usually read about someone who's in love with his celebrity best friend). Looking forward to your next update!
person jaskolka
schedule July 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
A very promising beginning and I already like both Jude and Perry. I can't wait for more, great job!
schedule July 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey, awesome story so far!

Poor Jude; so anti-social, even to Perry. He needs to lighten up some! He needs to get out there more and not be cooped up in that apartment all day!

Can't wait for the next chapter! :)