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October 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE how you give Cal a bit of background info...
it is sad that his father would let four men rape him, but that is in the past. The part with the pool shows that A know / understands more than he lets on... Cal bing afraid to be in the water bc he could not swim and also bc of he scares..
Cannot wait for your next chapter... is Cal going to answer the question? will he over come one fear? Hope you write soon!
it is sad that his father would let four men rape him, but that is in the past. The part with the pool shows that A know / understands more than he lets on... Cal bing afraid to be in the water bc he could not swim and also bc of he scares..
Cannot wait for your next chapter... is Cal going to answer the question? will he over come one fear? Hope you write soon!
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October 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nice to see they can understand. I hope he takes the new school, fresh start option.
I saw a few typo's but not bad for an unbata'd chappie.
I saw a few typo's but not bad for an unbata'd chappie.
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October 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yayyyyy another chapter. Beta or not I still loved it.
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October 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This chapter is great ! Thanks for sharing...
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October 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was amazing although short^^ i really want to se more!!! I hope to see you soon!!!
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October 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey. So I don't normally review, 'cause I usually forget. But, just wanted to see if you're okay and if you're still planning to update soon? Well, I hope everything's good and you get the change to update real soon. The more I read, the more interesting I find this story, especially as it's not your typical vampire story. It's different enough that I don't know what to expect, which makes me want to read more, since I can't guess what's going to happen next. So kudos for coming up with a unique vampire story, with plot and substance (and that's not just smut or another cliche vampire-human romance).
P.S. I love Shing. He's adorable! Poor thing's had it pretty rough. I'm glad Michael found him, and he's now being taken care of like he should've been all along.
P.S. I love Shing. He's adorable! Poor thing's had it pretty rough. I'm glad Michael found him, and he's now being taken care of like he should've been all along.
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September 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
aww poor cal and poor shane that messed up but i love how they have people who want to help them
and cant wait for the next updates
and cant wait for the next updates
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September 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just letting you know I'm reading and am enjoying the chapter. :)
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September 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thanks a lot for the update!!! I really like this story a lot!!!! Athough I think I have to read the whole thing agsin because a few things in the last chappie didn't make sense^^ Probably because I forgot some details ^^
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September 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ah ok now that I've read the whole story again this chappie makes absoloutly sense^^ I really forgot a lot of things ^^ Well great chappie!!! Finally he knows that they are vamps ^^ I can't wait for more!!! i love this story!!!1 Hope to see you soon!!!